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Emerge From the Shadow

You've been hurt 
You've been broken 
You've been doomed 
far too long 

You're hiding behind shadows
You're angry with the world 
Your silent face casts you away from society 
And you're left with feelings of intense depression

You said the heck with love
You thought you were safe down this valley
And now you're feeling defeated 
All of your thoughts on finality

Who do you seek for help 
What can you do to be free
When will you shine again
Where should you find happiness for good 

Baby you are it; not anyone, not anywhere
But within you is the power of your free will
So emerge from the shadow
Give your heart a will to find its joy

       Smile

Akkina R Downing 
     5-28-17

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Silent One Date: 12/25/2017 10:56:00 AM We all get hurt and face adversity... takes real strength to pull through... well written Kina Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 9/2/2017 8:48:00 PM Hi Akkina, I agree the power to be happy is ours and ours alone. We chose to let happiness live in our heart so let the SUN shine in baby!! AN amazing poem my dear friend. Expressed with such poetic bliss, wisdom and your own shining light. I so enjoyed your poem this evening my friend :) Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 9/3/2017 7:32:00 PM Hello my dearest friend, thank you so much for taking a time to visit me and left me a darling comment. I so love it. I've been busy this week haven't hadn't much time here but I should be good in a day or so to come by your way to read me some fantabulous poems. Hugs and smiles :)

Maria Williams Date: 8/1/2017 6:48:00 AM The power sits within us Akkina, as you so aptly pointed out. A great read, love your positive ending...Maria Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 8/1/2017 8:59:00 AM Thank you so much Maria :)

Edward Mccall Date: 7/4/2017 10:57:00 AM What a great poem Kina and what a great message at the end well done poetess well done. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 7/4/2017 12:44:00 PM Hehe... I'm trying my friend. You all are so good and I'm just trying to keep up :) thank you so much... hugs :)

Pashang Salehi Date: 6/24/2017 5:04:00 PM Hope for the joy of sunlight, shadows are temporary... Login to Reply Pashang Salehi Date: 6/25/2017 9:35:00 AM Always... Akkina Downing Date: 6/24/2017 10:12:00 PM Thank you so much pashang... hugs :)

Sara Ella Date: 6/4/2017 5:12:00 PM I love this poem, Akkina! It is so full of hope <3 A definite fav! :) Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 6/4/2017 5:19:00 PM Awe, thank you so much Sara. I appreciate your lovely visit and comment...hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 5/31/2017 8:34:00 AM May you walk in light and leave all shadows behind you. In fact you are the light which banishes darkness. Hugs Rick Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/31/2017 8:51:00 AM I Greatly appreciate your feed back Rick. It means a lot. Thank you so much :) hugs, Kina

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/29/2017 2:05:00 PM - One who is sad and lonely in the shadow, needs your warm words ... beautifully written, Akkina - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/29/2017 3:41:00 PM Thank you so much Anne-Lise, I love to hear your comments always... Hugs :)

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 5/29/2017 2:23:00 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/29/2017 4:43:00 AM Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment, Ravi. I always appreciate it :) hugs

Semih Bilgic Date: 5/28/2017 11:34:00 PM very nice I love this poem Login to Reply Semih Bilgic Date: 5/29/2017 4:56:00 AM thank you too Akkina Downing Date: 5/29/2017 4:44:00 AM Thank you Semih :)

White Wolf Date: 5/28/2017 10:43:00 PM The last stanza really packs a punch! It takes it home all the way! There are some good lyrics for a song in this piece too! Well done Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/29/2017 4:52:00 AM I thank you so much WW... hugs :)

Ed Farolan Date: 5/28/2017 10:25:00 PM When God is by your side, you need not be sad nor worried. He is the be all and end all of things. Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/29/2017 4:53:00 AM Oh but you are so very correct, Ed. Thank you :) hugs

Daniel Turner Date: 5/28/2017 2:23:00 PM Very positive and I'm assuming matches your bubbly personality. Nicely penned, Kina:) Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/28/2017 2:56:00 PM Thank you Danny :) xoxo

Heidi Sands Date: 5/28/2017 1:27:00 PM This is great Akkina. Well expressed and powerful postive ending :) Login to Reply Akkina Downing Date: 5/28/2017 2:18:00 PM Thank you so much Miss Heidi :)