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emerald green water turns into white spray... a city's outline sound of music entertains... a drone lands
Someone sent me an email of a person using a camera drone taking picture of ariel view of Niagara Falls, New York..

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Date: 9/26/2013 1:42:00 AM
Just Awesome - the use of a camera drone in a haiku (here the ancient and the future world mingle). using one of the basic elements of life - water.. but really like the use of 'objects' here.. Would LOVE to see the picture.
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Date: 9/24/2013 9:22:00 PM
I liked the first part of this poem a lot. What is a camera drone? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 9/24/2013 9:21:00 AM
You are a beautiful Haiku-ist..... Sara...... this is one of my favorite by you when it comes to haiku. Breathtaking imagery.... xox~ Linda
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Date: 9/24/2013 12:36:00 AM
All that could put the view of the falls before you. I love the poem...Love..Bidhu.
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Date: 9/23/2013 5:34:00 PM
hey, this is pretty neat. I especially love that first one.
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Date: 9/23/2013 10:09:00 AM
Loved your City's outline. Beautiful picture adorned with white spray. Loved always, bl
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Date: 9/23/2013 9:49:00 AM
beautiful, I just loved it. comment about my work more plz, thank you for your comment sara.
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Date: 9/23/2013 8:01:00 AM
A beautiful piece.
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Date: 9/23/2013 6:20:00 AM
This is a fantastic and wondrous write my friend! I just loved reading this pleasant poem this morning! The words "Emerald Green" leave such a beautiful image in my head, I often think of Ireland when I think of those two words! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!
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