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Embracing Christmas Cheer

Embrace sweet kisses under mistletoe, soon Santa will be riding on his sleigh. Outside the children making men of snow, the fondest friendship matters most this day. This is the day when all shall laugh and love. Forgiveness guaranteed, so let’s await for Jesus to be sent from up above. The angels coming shall destroy distrait. If you believe in hope you shall be free from all that brings misfortunate disdain. So take my hand and come and follow me, arrive with joy and kindness shall remain. Let’s comfort people needing drink and food- so Christmas donates peaceful gratitude. I have always struggled with IP, but I tried my best. Gift for a lady: Size 10 ring Favorite color: Purple (amethyst) October 22, 2018

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Date: 10/27/2018 9:36:00 PM
Very well done, I am glad I did not have to judge all of this very good poetry. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/27/2018 7:49:00 PM
Luloo, I enjoyed your upbeat entry filled with goodwill towards our fellow human beings. Congratulations on your high placement in the contest! Also, peace and the happiest of holidays to you and your family!! :) Bartholomew
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Date: 10/27/2018 3:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely winning poem Laura! : )
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Date: 10/27/2018 2:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement with this beautiful sonnet. I really love how you've included many different Christmas sentiments. Well-deserved win. My best. Deb
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Date: 10/27/2018 8:10:00 AM
Luloo, I love this wonderful sonnet, it's a winner with me. Congrats dear friend. John
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Date: 10/27/2018 1:10:00 AM
Congrats Lu!
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Date: 10/26/2018 11:41:00 PM
Lu, You work beautifully in iambic pentameter. What a delightful sonnet! Congratulations on your win in a highly competitive contest.
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Date: 10/23/2018 1:29:00 PM
Lovely poem Loo Lu good luck ; )
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Date: 10/22/2018 12:28:00 PM
Completely agree with you...You generate positive vibes here...All the best Loo Lu
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Date: 10/22/2018 10:19:00 AM
Love your opening lines and your poem leaves us with linked arms of comfort and gratidtude! Nice one, Luloo!
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