Embraceable

They say one cannot embrace pure silence,
But can they feel the silence embracing them?
Our minds in pausing and transitions,
Could it be…that
Within our souls is an air pocket or two?
Is there a space that should be filled?—can be filled?

The composer was aware by the traffic
That music is merely sounds
And he accepts those sounds and loves them!
Many have said if this was so,
How meaningless music would be!
But there is a certain truth to his words
That one can find buried inside 
Nothing is quiet
Everything is so loud 
Silence is naught but fought
And mechanical resonances bring peace to the heart 

Like sounds to music
Is like words to poetry
There is possibly no rhythm to it at all
But there is a mental tempo as hard as iron in this shackled mind 

Poems are all but words
I accept what they are
Simple, wonderful words

And they are embraceable
Even in our view of silence

-inspired by the composer John Cage on the “experience of silence and sound”-
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Novotny Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 8:19 AM
Perhaps music is just silence broken into uneven lengths? But your words. . . embraceable even in our view of silence. Delightful Chuck
O'Leary Avatar
September 10, 2012 at 7:40 AM
Very nice... illuminating! Terry
Bordner Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 11:43 PM
I believe the craft of poetry is the most challenging art form humans are able to construct because " good ' poetry requires a high caliber creative intellect combined with a well developed imagination so to produce what are generally regarded as masterpieces - music, architecture, philosophy, rhetoric, painting etc... can be accomplished with one or the other qualities of mind, but to make inspiring poetry one must have both - I am astounded by how many people that have no respect for poetry -
Brown Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 11:35 AM
Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your amazing poetry with us Laura. I enjoyed reading your poetry very much today. Love, Carol
Kearley Avatar
September 6, 2012 at 12:58 AM
The wisdom is just flowing here! Nice 1 :o) "Simple,wonderful words" Indeed...
Guzzi Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 6:05 PM
Very nice line! [ mental tempo as hard as iron in this shackled mind] Light & Love
Pettit Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 5:27 PM
I agree with everything Cindy has said just below.
Cayton Avatar
September 5, 2012 at 5:04 PM
well written piece. I really enjoyed it thouroghly. Cindy
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