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Embraceable

They say one cannot embrace pure silence, But can they feel the silence embracing them? Our minds in pausing and transitions, Could it be…that Within our souls is an air pocket or two? Is there a space that should be filled?—can be filled? The composer was aware by the traffic That music is merely sounds And he accepts those sounds and loves them! Many have said if this was so, How meaningless music would be! But there is a certain truth to his words That one can find buried inside Nothing is quiet Everything is so loud Silence is naught but fought And mechanical resonances bring peace to the heart Like sounds to music Is like words to poetry There is possibly no rhythm to it at all But there is a mental tempo as hard as iron in this shackled mind Poems are all but words I accept what they are Simple, wonderful words And they are embraceable Even in our view of silence -inspired by the composer John Cage on the “experience of silence and sound”-

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Date: 9/11/2012 8:19:00 AM
Perhaps music is just silence broken into uneven lengths? But your words. . . embraceable even in our view of silence. Delightful Chuck
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Date: 9/10/2012 7:40:00 AM
Very nice... illuminating! Terry
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Date: 9/6/2012 11:43:00 PM
I believe the craft of poetry is the most challenging art form humans are able to construct because " good ' poetry requires a high caliber creative intellect combined with a well developed imagination so to produce what are generally regarded as masterpieces - music, architecture, philosophy, rhetoric, painting etc... can be accomplished with one or the other qualities of mind, but to make inspiring poetry one must have both - I am astounded by how many people that have no respect for poetry -
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Date: 9/6/2012 11:35:00 AM
Hoping you continue to find the inspiration to write and share your amazing poetry with us Laura. I enjoyed reading your poetry very much today. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/6/2012 12:58:00 AM
The wisdom is just flowing here! Nice 1 :o) "Simple,wonderful words" Indeed...
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Date: 9/5/2012 6:05:00 PM
Very nice line! [ mental tempo as hard as iron in this shackled mind] Light & Love
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Date: 9/5/2012 5:27:00 PM
I agree with everything Cindy has said just below.
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Date: 9/5/2012 5:04:00 PM
well written piece. I really enjoyed it thouroghly. Cindy
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