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Embrace the Ride

Life can be compared to an enormous slide, though it can be scary we must enjoy the ride. It has many ups and downs but we mustn’t hide. We must face our fears with dignity and pride, even if it means falling on our back side. Let hope for a better tomorrow be your guide, Couple hope with love and they shall coincide. Next positivity will flow because hope and love reside. 2-23-18 Alexis Y.

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Marc Acrich

Date: 4/11/2018 1:01:00 PM

You know I kind of like poetry that is in plain English and not so glorious that I can't understand themNot too much honey on them. , simple but really good

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 2/25/2018 8:46:00 PM

An awesome uplifting write Alexis!~Che :)

Carol B.

Date: 2/25/2018 4:28:00 PM

Very uplifting poem Alexis. I love the message. :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 2/25/2018 1:00:00 PM

A fantastic monorhyme Alexis full of inspiration. Love and hope and positive vibes make the ride a lot more smooth and enjoyable. A great message wrapped in poetic lines capped with wonderful rhymes..

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 2/25/2018 11:30:00 AM

A beautiful inspiring poem with great positive vibes. Mono rhymed superbly. Great rhyming word choice ESP towards the end. I like reading n writing such poems. Thumbs up. Soo nice to read from u again, Pleez do comment my newest poem here too.

Constance La France

Date: 2/24/2018 2:52:00 PM

Alexis, loved your poem a lot, your words ring so true, everyone should follow those rules ~

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/24/2018 4:33:00 AM

Beautiful verse Alexis, how true life can be a bumpy ride sometimes and we just have to hold on. Tom

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2018 11:32:00 PM

I love your outlook on life, Alexis, and I need to always look for the better outlook ... Thank you for sharing and bring back my thoughts .. hugs eve

Supraja Kannan

Date: 2/23/2018 8:58:00 PM

A great inspiring write ... Thank you for sharing this uplifting piece...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2018 7:20:00 PM

I see your response to Rhoda. You REALLY like monorhyme!! I really liked this one!!

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/23/2018 7:32:00 PM

Hi Andrea, Thank you very much. I do like the form just like you enjoy the Etheree. I appreciate that you stopped by today:-)Alexis

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 2/23/2018 6:24:00 PM

I'm seeing a lot of great monorhymes lately. This is one of them. Is there a contest I'm missing? Love this write. Very well done.

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/23/2018 7:14:00 PM

Hi Rhoda, Thank you very much. There's no contest for monorhymes that I know about, I just happen to like the form. I appreciate that you visited me today:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/23/2018 3:56:00 PM

Great advice in your poem Alexis..you captured well the ups and downs of life..hope is a great motivator.

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/23/2018 7:21:00 PM

Hi Vijay, Thank you so much for the nice compliment. I appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/23/2018 3:53:00 PM

A very inspirational and positive poem to read today. Well done! Thanks for sharing Alexis :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/23/2018 7:20:00 PM

Hi Heidi, Thank you so much for the nice compliment. I appreciate that you stopped by today:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/23/2018 3:53:00 PM

Saving as a favorite :)

Alexis Y.
Date: 2/23/2018 7:17:00 PM

Hi Heidi, Thank you so much. I appreciate that you are faving it:-) Alexis