Embrace the Lines

I wear my wrinkles proudly.
In fact, they aren’t so bad.
They show I’m used to laughing
and I’m hardly ever sad!
These crinkles in the corners
of my sparkling eyes of green
reveal an inner child
who’s as sprightly as a teen.

And though I’ve tried to zap them
with peels and botox too,
these lines have strong immunity
to staying out of view!
They’re little rascals, just like me,
so clever and headstrong,
that they resurface within months.
They can’t be kept down long!

And why should I erase them?
I still don’t look my age!
I guess I rather need these lines
To look a wee bit sage!
I can’t look TOO much younger
than how I am perceived,
or saying I’m a grandma,
I might not be believed!

Imagine me parading
With a face as wrinkle-free
As that of Cher or any 
Other rich celebrity!
Well, since I have no money,
to all I must declare:
Embrace the lines that you might have,
for mine I'll proudly wear!

For the Contest of David Lindsay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 10:42 AM
This is so truly said Andrea, I do follow the lines, I'm proud of my first wrinkles! :D Congrats my dear.
Y. Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 1:41 AM
Hi Andrea, I enjoyed your humorous take on the theme. It's good to see you in the winner's circle. Congrats on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Woods    Avatar
July 14, 2016 at 12:37 AM
Brilliant, and fantastic humour as well. Congratulations.
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 13, 2016 at 8:36 PM
This is a good take on the theme.....nicely penned...Congratulations
Watson Avatar
February 24, 2014 at 4:52 PM
Do you still look good in skinny jeans or does your bum need ironing , lol Delightful as always Andrea.
Davis Avatar
February 22, 2014 at 9:03 PM
Andrea What a poem full of wisdom and charm. We all have lines that made us who we are. Nicely done Thanks for the amazing comment on my Pirates poem Hugs
Vaillancourt Avatar
January 19, 2014 at 4:12 PM
perfectly created and very well constructed
Breidenthal Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 12:37 AM
very cute, Andrea : ) It's been forever since I have read some of your work. It's nice to be back. Stay proud - you're an amazing poet. Always, Laura
A   Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 1:02 AM
Hi Andrea, hope you are enjoying your vacation..., Thank you for spreading and sharing your kindness. You know me I’ will always enjoy stopping by with love and support, no matter if I do not Understand what I am reading at times. I am very grateful and thankful to all who have been supportive of me one way or another. Your heartfelt words are the main attraction of who you are… Thanks for your inspiring visit. ----- Happy Thanksgiving ~ LINDA
That Archaic Poet Avatar
November 22, 2013 at 10:46 AM
ANY poem that mentions Cher is an A+ piece in my book and I'm happy you won a contest with this awesome work. Kudos, Andrea! :)
Fraser Avatar
November 21, 2013 at 6:49 PM
A great tribute to those wisdom lines we all carry as we age, niceky penned Andrea, blessings Carl
A   Avatar
November 20, 2013 at 8:08 PM
Hey Andrea, , Congratulations on your win ~xox~ LINDA
Liwayway Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 10:49 AM
Beautifully written poem friend Andrea. I also wear my wrinkles proudly..I don't care anyway hahaha..thanks for sharing this and big congratulations on your win ;) ;) Have a nice weekend. Hugs :)
Johnson Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 6:52 PM
Good for you. Wear them proudly. congratulations on your poem and win. I never saw this contest. I have been having distractions. Love, Joyce
Horsch Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 1:31 PM
Avery good poem Andrea, Congrats on your win.
May Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 5:36 AM
this is a gem....congrats on your win
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 4:38 AM
- Congrats on your fine win, Andrea. - Have a great weekend.- oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dua Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 4:15 AM
Hahaha(giggle) ..... You really made me laugh .... :)))) Congrats on your fine and deserving win ....keep writing ... Hugs and smiles ~Saanvi
Fiery Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 2:56 AM
I am so proud of this poem...you have crafted this work with so much of perfection. Yes ! we all should be proud of our age..wrinkle is just not a sign of age...and yes you don't look like a grandma...i loved this Andrea...faving it now ...cheers !
J.T. Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 7:06 PM
~Soup Mail~
Muitherero Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 12:07 AM
Hat off! Show those contours that show the landscape of times you have seen, hehehe...
Seal Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 9:07 PM
Yo there crows feet, how yer doin? hahaha. the good thing about these though Petal, is that whatever face you're pulling, people think you're smiling lol from one who knows lol. Take care, Richard
Horne Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 1:30 PM
LOL, had a chuckle here and so true - our laughter lines are beautiful : )
Sirak Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 9:31 AM
Ha Ha ! Love it! There is a beauty in age that takes years to perfect.
Jones Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 6:23 AM
Hey Andrea...yep....54...and smile lines glowing....loved your happy poem on this subject...outstanding:-) :-) :-) :-)
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