Eve Roper Poet Senryu

Embrace In a Dream

dancing while band plays
inelegant  sits alone
hadn’t woken from dream

sits alone to find
a lie of  love pulled apart
awoke from a dream

embrace in a dream 
no one  sees  she sits alone 
wake up without her


12/31/2016

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Afzal Nusker January 17, 2017 at 12:14 AM Quite sad but wonderfully stated.

Jean Murray January 4, 2017 at 6:22 AM Poor little wallflower. Elegantly put Eve.

John Fleming January 1, 2017 at 5:52 PM You have managed to impart great sadness and melancholy in this little poem, Eve - Great write! Have a wonderful New Year - Cheers! :) john Eve Roper January 1, 2017 at 9:24 PM Thank you so very much , John, for your inspiring compliment :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve

Eileen Manassian January 1, 2017 at 5:46 PM A lie of love...that can make anyone want to sit alone...untrusting. Sending you hugs, dear. Happy New Year. May it be filled with beauty and love. Eve Roper January 1, 2017 at 9:23 PM Thank you sweet lady, I love see you when you are able :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich January 1, 2017 at 4:39 PM a sad one, Eve. I enjoyed this from you, and happy New year, dear. Eve Roper January 1, 2017 at 9:23 PM Thank you so very much for reading, Andrea :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve

Becca Teagan January 1, 2017 at 4:20 PM sad, to think of her sitting alone. Sweet write, Eve. Hugs Eve Roper January 1, 2017 at 9:22 PM Thank you so very much, Rebecca.. :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen January 1, 2017 at 12:55 PM - A tear of sadness ... great written, Eve - Happy New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Eve Roper January 1, 2017 at 9:22 PM Thank you Anne-Lise, I'm tickled you enjoyed it :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve

Probir Gupta January 1, 2017 at 5:06 AM Nice Senryu, Eve ... enjoyed reading it ... Eve Roper January 1, 2017 at 9:20 PM Thank you so very much for reading, Probir :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve