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Embrace In a Dream

dancing while band plays inelegant sits alone hadn’t woken from dream sits alone to find a lie of love pulled apart awoke from a dream embrace in a dream no one sees she sits alone wake up without her 12/31/2016

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Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/17/2017 12:14:00 AM

Quite sad but wonderfully stated.

Jean Murray

Date: 1/4/2017 6:22:00 AM

Poor little wallflower. Elegantly put Eve.

John Fleming

Date: 1/1/2017 5:52:00 PM

You have managed to impart great sadness and melancholy in this little poem, Eve - Great write! Have a wonderful New Year - Cheers! :) john

Eve Roper
Date: 1/1/2017 9:24:00 PM

Thank you so very much , John, for your inspiring compliment :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve

Eileen Manassian

Date: 1/1/2017 5:46:00 PM

A lie of love...that can make anyone want to sit alone...untrusting. Sending you hugs, dear. Happy New Year. May it be filled with beauty and love.

Eve Roper
Date: 1/1/2017 9:23:00 PM

Thank you sweet lady, I love see you when you are able :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/1/2017 4:39:00 PM

a sad one, Eve. I enjoyed this from you, and happy New year, dear.

Eve Roper
Date: 1/1/2017 9:23:00 PM

Thank you so very much for reading, Andrea :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve

Becca Teagan

Date: 1/1/2017 4:20:00 PM

sad, to think of her sitting alone. Sweet write, Eve. Hugs

Eve Roper
Date: 1/1/2017 9:22:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Rebecca.. :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/1/2017 12:55:00 PM

- A tear of sadness ... great written, Eve - Happy New Year :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper
Date: 1/1/2017 9:22:00 PM

Thank you Anne-Lise, I'm tickled you enjoyed it :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve

Probir Gupta

Date: 1/1/2017 5:06:00 AM

Nice Senryu, Eve ... enjoyed reading it ...

Eve Roper
Date: 1/1/2017 9:20:00 PM

Thank you so very much for reading, Probir :) Happy New years and many more to come. Hugs Eve