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Winter heart so cold My fire extinct long ago In ice, hail and fog Small embers of love remain Only you can rekindle

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/27/2017 10:49:00 PM

This is a gem Darren!

Darren White
Date: 1/27/2017 11:12:00 PM

Wow, thanks :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 1/27/2017 7:53:00 AM

So beautifully written, it touched my heart! Love it! Pandita

Darren White
Date: 1/27/2017 8:08:00 AM

I am so happy you love my poem, Pandita :)

Sara Ella

Date: 1/25/2017 11:16:00 PM

The contrast of ideas is perfect! Love this one for the total balance of cold and hawt <3

Darren White
Date: 1/25/2017 11:21:00 PM

Thanks Sara, I love it too :)

Tim Smith

Date: 1/25/2017 9:15:00 PM

An excellent Tanka Darren...you should get this published ...I have a couple at tankajournal.com

Darren White
Date: 1/25/2017 11:21:00 PM

Oh how cool, I'll check that out, thank you :)

Chris Green

Date: 1/25/2017 7:11:00 AM

Really nice my friend. It is nice when we find someone who can rekindle that flame

Darren White
Date: 1/25/2017 7:24:00 AM

Yes, exactly, thank you my friend :)

Joseph May

Date: 1/25/2017 6:59:00 AM

Great Tanka Darren...

Darren White
Date: 1/25/2017 7:24:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph :)

Tamal Kundu

Date: 1/25/2017 3:21:00 AM

The contrast is beautiful in this poem, Darren.

Darren White
Date: 1/25/2017 4:14:00 AM

Thank you, Tamal.

White Wolf

Date: 1/25/2017 2:19:00 AM

It's a hard form this one, but you have done it more than justice, Duir! From the smallest of embers can rage a bushfire! Another name for the Druids was the Fire Fathers. Especially the Bards, it was called Headfire. Where your embers do rage! /|\

Darren White
Date: 1/25/2017 2:22:00 AM

I remember you telling me that :) Slowly those lessons start to enter my poems, just as Tao does. Melikes. Thanks Budgie!