Embers

~~~~

It's late at night, the television off.
The fire burns low and the room grows cool
On the mantelpiece an old clock
ticking loudly can be heard
above the soft crackling
of the dying fire.
The embers fall
and ash spills
on the
hearth.
One
the clock
strikes it's chime.
The old woman
sits in the armchair
drinking from a lukewarm
cup of tea made earlier
unwilling to disturb the cat
curled like a furry ball on her knee.
She will go to bed soon, but not just yet.

~~~~

11th. September 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Mehta Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 2:08 AM
Nicely paINTED PICTURE WITH WORDS, CONGRATS, mARGArET
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 11:45 PM
I just really love this one. could read you forever, sweetie . You are so good!! Congrats on the win.
Foster Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:14 AM
Thank you Andrea, take care.
Johnson Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 9:16 PM
I didn't see you peeking into my window at my kitty and me. You certainly got it right. congratulations. Love, Joyce
Foster Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:13 AM
Thank you Joyce. Nothing better than to curl up in front of the fire with the cat and a cup of tea.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 8:28 PM
What a beautiful picture you painted Margaret. So lovely. Congratulations on your win.
Foster Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:15 AM
Many thanks Brenda
Gibson Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 8:21 PM
This is beautiful, Margaret. I really enjoyed the imagery. Congrats.
Foster Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:16 AM
Thank you so much
Hamilton Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 6:58 PM
a poem of many layers that could spin in so many directions contentment, loneliness, resignation. Margaret a great pen congrats on 1st place and ty for your support hugs
Foster Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 4:19 AM
Thank you for your comment, I am pleased you saw fit to include my effort among the great poets who entered some excellent work.
Yvonne Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 6:48 PM
A very creative write. Congratulations on your win.
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 6:34 PM
wonderful imagery Margaret i especially love the ending with the cold tea and the comfy cat:-) many congrats on your win. hugs jan xxx
Jae Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 2:05 AM
This is a really cool form, and done quite nicely!! And thank you for the encouraging words! I've never thought much of my writing so it's incredibly uplifting, so again thank you!
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 9:02 AM
I DO love a good etheree, and you have delivered!! A simple scene painted to perfection!!
Mehta Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:44 AM
Well crafted Etheree, good luck, Margaret
Johnson Avatar
September 11, 2014 at 11:13 AM
A great etheree, Margaret. good luck. Love, Joyce
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