Embelished Vision

Shards rain down
around me
    ringing upon the ground,
displacing the silence
that was assaulting me
mere moments ago.
Had to get out 
and even as the blood
drips from my many wounds
I lurch into motion
     running into the darkness,
         feeling it envelope me.

The moon
   is a black spot in the sky,
coating everything
with its unholy illumination,
and within it
   I can envision
      my succubus,
sweet pale skin,
         smooth and flawless,
lushes curved fangs
   jutting from under pouting lips
glistening in the starlight,
   raven and golden hair
      playing in the breeze
as she flexes her batlike wings.
I can see her red tinted eyes
    glowing in the night
and hear
   her claws clicking together.

Keeping myself upwind
   I slink from tree to tree,         
                   circling.
She stands over a fresh kill
    wings enfolded like a cape,
blood pooling in the soil
  at her feet.
The scene 
    entices me,
almost driving me
         to move closer,
must resist the pull,
      get a feel for the situation.
I sniff the air,
the briny scent of blood
   approaches me,
 beneath it,
the loam scent of earth
     permeates,
  lower still,
the smell of my temptress
     drifts in,
  sulfuric musk,
    brimstone and sandlewood,
       ash and raw meat,
sending shivers
   down my back
like when the first drops
  of a cold rain
      hits your skin.

For now
   I am content
just to gaze on this
    ferocious beauty,
watching
  as she
feasts on the carcass
of the beast
she so eloquently took down.
As the mist settles in
and removes her from view
the vision of her
   is still burned into my eyes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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