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Born without spot, all equal in God’s eye Yet, on winds aloft, Envy’s cursed seed. Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie. The fertile soil beguiles, rooting on the sly. Black veils of mistrust tinting each good deed! Born without spot, all equal in God’s eye. Despair rides the rails without alibi Gaining companions, divided by greed. Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie. Privilege and fame, an Icarus sky Blinds my soul, I turn from truth before me; Born without spot, all equal in God’s eye. Honor’s reward illusive, cry or try. Bind me to my conscience, with chains I plead. Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie. If submit we will, our death awaits neigh. We will to Envy’s sour fruit concede. Born without spot, all equal in God’s eye. Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie. Contest Entry: A MAJOR WORLD PROBLEM Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins Submitted: 4/29/21 Placing: 8th

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Date: 5/10/2021 10:37:00 AM
Brilliantly written with profound depth Ken. Yours is a call to be contented with our many blessings! Congratulations on your win! Go Dawgs!
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/13/2021 9:58:00 AM
Miton was quite generous. Thanks - Ken
Date: 5/9/2021 3:57:00 PM
Hi Ken, I echo what Andrea said. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-)Alexis
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Date: 5/9/2021 9:18:00 AM
You caught one of the very worst problems because it is the source of all the other. Congrats on the win.
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Date: 5/9/2021 8:59:00 AM
Hi Ken - You were the only one who highlighted this major world problem in a very well-written villanelle. It was a pleasure to read and certainly worthy of its high place among all the submissions. Thank you!
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Date: 5/7/2021 5:19:00 AM
This is such a great piece, in a difficult format. GL in the contest.
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Ken Rone
Date: 5/7/2021 7:15:00 AM
Thank you Terry. I appreciate your encouragement on this my first effort.
Date: 4/29/2021 7:13:00 PM
*Born without spot, all equal in God’s eye.* So true. It is easy to get tangled up in that web, of deceit and darkness. Evil is all around (the devils influence) This is deep and powerful, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
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Ken Rone
Date: 4/30/2021 7:18:00 AM
Hello Brandy: Thank you for your kind comments. I hope I have found a new friend. All my best to you and your creative endeavors. - Ken
Date: 4/29/2021 4:56:00 PM
Hatred fuels many evil actions that will lead to consequences one way or another. Well written challenging form Ken :)
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Ken Rone
Date: 4/30/2021 7:19:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. I hope you are having a wonderful and productive day. - Ken
Date: 4/29/2021 4:10:00 PM
Wonderful villlanelle dear Ken, the message was clear hatred are devil related good luck in the contest but it’s a win for sure, Have a great night Ken
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Ken Rone
Date: 4/30/2021 7:20:00 AM
My best to you, I will, as always, be looking for your new submittals. - Ken
Date: 4/29/2021 2:23:00 PM
The essence of your message for me--Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie--so well said in this hard to execute form. All the best, Ken.
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Ken Rone
Date: 4/29/2021 3:54:00 PM
Thanks Vijay. I'm glad it came thru...I had my doubts. You are more than kind. - Ken

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