Embedded Evil

Born without spot, all equal in God’s eye
Yet, on winds aloft, Envy’s cursed seed.
Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie.

The fertile soil beguiles, rooting on the sly.
Black veils of mistrust tinting each good deed!
Born without spot, all equal in God’s eye.

Despair rides the rails without alibi
Gaining companions, divided by greed. 
Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie.

Privilege and fame, an Icarus sky
Blinds my soul, I turn from truth before me;
Born without spot, all equal in God’s eye.

Honor’s reward illusive, cry or try.
Bind me to my conscience, with chains I plead.
Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie.

If submit we will, our death awaits neigh.
We will to Envy’s sour fruit concede.
Born without spot, all equal in God’s eye.
Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie.


Contest Entry: A MAJOR WORLD PROBLEM 
Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins
Submitted: 4/29/21
Placing: 8th
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kauffman Avatar
May 10, 2021 at 10:37 AM
Brilliantly written with profound depth Ken. Yours is a call to be contented with our many blessings! Congratulations on your win! Go Dawgs!
Rone Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Miton was quite generous. Thanks - Ken
Y. Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 3:57 PM
Hi Ken, I echo what Andrea said. Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-)Alexis
Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 9:18 AM
You caught one of the very worst problems because it is the source of all the other. Congrats on the win.
Hankins Avatar
May 9, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Hi Ken - You were the only one who highlighted this major world problem in a very well-written villanelle. It was a pleasure to read and certainly worthy of its high place among all the submissions. Thank you!
Miller Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 5:19 AM
This is such a great piece, in a difficult format. GL in the contest.
Rone Avatar
May 7, 2021 at 7:15 AM
Thank you Terry. I appreciate your encouragement on this my first effort.
Nicole Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 7:13 PM
*Born without spot, all equal in God’s eye.* So true. It is easy to get tangled up in that web, of deceit and darkness. Evil is all around (the devils influence) This is deep and powerful, all at the same time. ~ Brandy
Rone Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 7:18 AM
Hello Brandy: Thank you for your kind comments. I hope I have found a new friend. All my best to you and your creative endeavors. - Ken
Sands Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 4:56 PM
Hatred fuels many evil actions that will lead to consequences one way or another. Well written challenging form Ken :)
Rone Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Thank you Heidi. I hope you are having a wonderful and productive day. - Ken
Poet Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 4:10 PM
Wonderful villlanelle dear Ken, the message was clear hatred are devil related good luck in the contest but it’s a win for sure, Have a great night Ken
Rone Avatar
April 30, 2021 at 7:20 AM
My best to you, I will, as always, be looking for your new submittals. - Ken
Pandit Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 2:23 PM
The essence of your message for me--Hatred warms the bed where Evil will lie--so well said in this hard to execute form. All the best, Ken.
Rone Avatar
April 29, 2021 at 3:54 PM
Thanks Vijay. I'm glad it came thru...I had my doubts. You are more than kind. - Ken
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