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Embarrassing Moment

I have had some embarrassing moments in my life for sure, Well, there was the time in Grade One when I peed my pants; At a dance once, three girls wore the same dress as me, And one day wearing high heels I tripped on the bus. But I think the most embarrassing moment came not long ago, I fancied myself a dancer so I joined a local jazz group; Not some one evening a week deal but the real thing, a school, We rehearsed three times a week and at home. Of course, to be a dancer one must look the part of a dancer, So I invested in shoes and outfits and all the sparkle; We were rehearsing for a Christmas recital in a theater, And I knew all my steps, they were etched in my mind. The night of the recital I was so nervous, well we all were, We were on stage and my family and friends had come; The music started and I forgot every single step, I froze, When a part for spinning came, I spun myself away. I hung up my jazz shoes after that and never went back, Embarrassing stuff happens in life and no one ever dies; But it can still dwell within and hurt your confidence and pride, Oh as a little girl, I put my hair clip in a electric outlet, once . . . _________________ September 21, 2015 Poetry/Narrative/Embarrassing Moment Copyright Protected, ID 15-711-140-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Embarrassing Moment, sponsor, Mystic Rose First Place

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Date: 10/23/2015 11:20:00 PM
B W, I'll bet putting that hair clip into the electric socket was as ''ENERJAZZING" as the prospect of the dance recital. Well written!
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Date: 10/22/2015 12:54:00 PM
Congrats on the winning poem. When I was in 1st grade I got up for a dance recital... And suddenly forgot every step too... My Grandparents had come to watch... Everyone suggested I give up dancing after that... It was my elipepsy kicking in to make me forget but they didn't know... But I did quit. I was Soooo embarassed...
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Date: 10/22/2015 6:33:00 AM
And the list goes on and on. How funny and very well written. Thanks for sharing. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/20/2015 10:44:00 PM
Real wonderful broken! Congrats on ur awesome win!
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Date: 10/20/2015 8:56:00 PM
Very good! Congratulations Janice
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Date: 10/20/2015 5:36:00 PM
Broken wing, calling it stage fright. I've gone through a few of those for the brain just shuts down. Congratulations on your wonderful win a7!!!
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Date: 10/20/2015 4:00:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats: Broken wings-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/20/2015 3:55:00 PM
A great poem about your embarrassing moment, Broken. Can identify with this a bit when I forgot lines to a part I had in a sixth- grade play. Nicely expressed, and congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 9/22/2015 3:34:00 PM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2015 3:08:00 AM
Nice piece, BW...... Don't stop the jazz, though.…..lol
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Date: 9/21/2015 8:56:00 PM
Cute BW.
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Date: 9/21/2015 8:19:00 PM
I love the beautiful flow of your write.....let your unstoppable good emotion continue to flow....an eloquent and excellent write.......A.M.
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Date: 9/21/2015 4:54:00 PM
yes our confidence does take a bashing but we do bounce back - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/21/2015 4:36:00 PM
Broken Wings don't give up. Follow your passions. Most millionaires go out of business twice before they reach success. How many times do we rewrite a poem to make it right. Mistakes are made we all make them.Brush it off and make it right.
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Michael Tor
Date: 9/21/2015 4:37:00 PM
Enjoy your dance have fun.

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