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Clerimerick Couplets (hybrid form)
Sponsored by: Mark Toney

 

Elvis Aaron Presley

The legendary teen idol Elvis Aaron Presley
was criticized for his gyrations, expressly.
And yet, this shooting star went supernova,
morphing into a teenage Casanova.

When this Memphis boy began to croon
he'd wildly grind his hips to the tune;
and flashing his ice-blue eyes,
he'd generate tears and sighs; 
while making the young girls scream and swoon.

Born blond, he dyed his hair black
and the King never went back.
He seemed to suffer an itch,
the way he would twist and twitch.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Drowley Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well rhymed.
Empress Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 1:26 AM
Elvis presley, such a handsome and charming legend! Beautiful rhymes dear emile well done on your placement too! Congratulations
Pinet Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Thanks, Ink Empress; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Anaya Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 3:34 PM
Congratulations Emile! I love everything about this Clerimerick, I'm faving it oh & steeling the photo, it's stunning. Best, Anaya
Pinet Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Thanks, Anaya; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Toney Avatar
July 21, 2024 at 1:59 PM
Emile, I can tell you had fun putting this one together! This is a Fav for me. The photo you chose is fabulous. Congratulations on your first-place win!
Pinet Avatar
July 22, 2024 at 7:21 AM
Thanks, Mark; you are right. This was fun to write; I grew up with Elvis; he was always my favorite performer. I appreciate the win and your comments, my friend. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:16 AM
I can't wait to see this contest judged and view the many cool personalities written about
Pinet Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 10:41 AM
There are so many to choose from.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 11:34 AM
Hello Emile, Elvis Presley was very famous. I use to watch all his movies. i did like his music. my friend enjoy your long weekend coming up my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 10:52 AM
Hello Emile, did you like Elvis Presley? Your welcome my friend. Enjoy your long weekend. /Darlene/
Pinet Avatar
June 27, 2024 at 3:48 PM
Thanks, Darlene; as always, I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 9:52 AM
Love this. And I sure loved his singing!
Pinet Avatar
June 23, 2024 at 10:46 AM
Thanks, Andrea; I grew up with his music, and I loved his voice...who would have thought that he was a blond? I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Greenhough Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 1:11 AM
I remember Elvis. I wasn't a fan, but his songs were good. He deserves this tribute, and you deserve applause for this poem. It is a lovely look back.
Pinet Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 5:32 AM
Thanks, Hilda; I appreciate your comments, my friend. Emile.
Christian Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 9:42 AM
He was verry good my sister liked his music a lot and of course she had his pictures on the wall haha One had freddie murcury One had showaddywaddy Our lynn was into abba We didnt get any space left to put picrurss up haha
Pinet Avatar
June 18, 2024 at 10:29 AM
Thanks, Diane; I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.
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