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Elusive Peace

When
 We live
 On this earth
And value each
 Stranger as a dear
 Future friend, and extend 
That truth to all life with minds
 And souls, then perhaps lonely earth,
Will experience  elusive peace
And fill the needy yearning of us all.

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/27/2016 3:15:00 AM

Brenda, it is the only path to true peace. Your message speaks to the light within us all. These are very insightful words. Blessings and Happy Easter, Connie ; )

Daver Austin

Date: 3/22/2016 11:43:00 AM

The Peace Prize to this one, Brenda. Congrats. Love, daver

Ann Roske

Date: 10/4/2012 11:57:00 AM

Nicely done - great example of the form.

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/21/2012 9:54:00 PM

Wow. I love this. Can't agree more with the message. My you have a way with words. Always, Laura

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/6/2012 2:37:00 PM

Great thoughts penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..The design looks almost like a Christmas Tree..The great present would be peace ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/28/2012 7:18:00 AM

a heartfelt and bittersweet song filled with longing, brenda... may peace truly live among us...endearing!..:) huggs!

Justin Bordner

Date: 7/27/2012 11:07:00 PM

Brenda, your beautiful works satiate some of that need I have in my Soul- You are so special - unselfish - powerful concept,that Earth is lonely despite "all the goings on"- with respect, J.A.B.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/27/2012 6:09:00 PM

so true! Glad you came home to us. Light & Love

Brenda Atry
Date: 7/27/2012 6:13:00 PM

HUGS TO YOU! I missed you all...I am finally rising out of the chaos...How are you Deb?,,I have really missed you the most (OOOOOH, I do not want to get in trouble for this), but you are my girl! You rally for me when I'm down, no better mentorhere than you...