Brenda Atry Poet Etheree

Elusive Peace

When
 We live
 On this earth
And value each
 Stranger as a dear
 Future friend, and extend 
That truth to all life with minds
 And souls, then perhaps lonely earth,
Will experience  elusive peace
And fill the needy yearning of us all.

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Connie Marcum Wong March 27, 2016 at 3:15 AM Brenda, it is the only path to true peace. Your message speaks to the light within us all. These are very insightful words. Blessings and Happy Easter, Connie ; )

Daver Austin March 22, 2016 at 11:43 AM The Peace Prize to this one, Brenda. Congrats. Love, daver

Ann Roske October 4, 2012 at 11:57 AM Nicely done - great example of the form.

Laura Breidenthal August 21, 2012 at 9:54 PM Wow. I love this. Can't agree more with the message. My you have a way with words. Always, Laura

Sara Kendrick August 6, 2012 at 2:37 PM Great thoughts penned..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..The design looks almost like a Christmas Tree..The great present would be peace ...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud July 28, 2012 at 7:18 AM a heartfelt and bittersweet song filled with longing, brenda... may peace truly live among us...endearing!..:) huggs!

Justin Bordner July 27, 2012 at 11:07 PM Brenda, your beautiful works satiate some of that need I have in my Soul- You are so special - unselfish - powerful concept,that Earth is lonely despite "all the goings on"- with respect, J.A.B.

Debbie Guzzi July 27, 2012 at 6:09 PM so true! Glad you came home to us. Light & Love Brenda Atry July 27, 2012 at 6:13 PM HUGS TO YOU! I missed you all...I am finally rising out of the chaos...How are you Deb?,,I have really missed you the most (OOOOOH, I do not want to get in trouble for this), but you are my girl! You rally for me when I'm down, no better mentorhere than you...

Anne-Lise Andresen July 26, 2012 at 12:09 PM Well done Brenda.....sweet and lovely !!! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kim Merryman July 25, 2012 at 8:23 PM A lovely message, Brenda. Nice etheree. Love, Kim