Elora

Tis not a contemporary 
artist that can capture your integral purity-
Perhaps da Vinci may have done you justice,
yet with his corpulent and stern pieces, 
He never would have seized your true essence.

Your skin opulent and pale,
Immaculate without fail-
Spirited, flaming hair-
Giving an unrivaled flare.

Tis not your beauty an artist must conquer.

But the luminosity emanating from within.
Can this ever be done?
By the greatest of painters or men?

A. Green


Written for my daughter, Elora.
Whose inside, and outside beauty
is unmatched in all eternity.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Strand Avatar
May 31, 2010 at 8:41 AM
trust she like your loving words Amy.Rgds Brian
La France Avatar
May 30, 2010 at 7:22 AM
Amy, this poem is absolutely beautiful. I just love, love each line. I have rated it a seven. Constance
Sweetheart Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 8:38 PM
Thankxx for the congrats already on my Say the Word entry .. seems I have written more poems away then ever at home..haha.. and this one u wrote for your daughter with the gorgeous name..is stunning Amy... I luv doing poems for a specific persona nd then giving it for a gift in a frame.. I used to have a business where I did ages ago.. good luck if u enter it in Syed's contest which is a free style entry.. this is a winner ..luv.. "Sweetheart"...
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 2:41 PM
Great write in appreciation of your daughter...I know that she appreciated the write and the time that it took you to write it...Keep the creative pen flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...I thank you for spending your time doing that...I am sorry for taking so long to return the comments but have been out of town..Keep the creative pen flowing...Sara
Richards Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 8:01 AM
This poem radiates!! Such personal feelings and expressions of love, even more beauty that she is a step-child.....how fortunate she is to have you in her life! :)
Devonshire Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Your daughter sounds very special, Amy, and I hope she enjoyed reading this poem because it truly reflects a mother's deepest love. Best wishes, Carolyn
Jordan Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:34 AM
Amy, a beautiful tribute to your beautiful little girl. Enjoy every moment because they fly by so fast.God Bless, mj
A  Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 4:05 AM
Good morning Amy, nice dedication to Elora. Have a nice fine Saturday,,Skat
Green Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 1:43 AM
Step mum, actually...but O' well. She's stillmine, just not by birth... and will be 17 in a few more days.... AAAIIEEEEE!
Tideswell Avatar
May 29, 2010 at 1:41 AM
Absolutely beautiful. What an amazing gift for any daughter to receive from her mum.
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