Elmer

all the reptiles gathered round when elmer the frog hopped to town never was history croaked with such boastful glee till from his pad he fell and drowned.

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Jerry Dinzes

Date: 12/31/2017 12:56:00 AM

Pretty classy for a limerick! Really fun. Thanks.

Richard Breese
Date: 2/16/2018 11:45:00 AM

Thanks Jerry.

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/21/2014 9:57:00 AM

Oh poor elmer.

Richard Breese
Date: 9/30/2014 5:09:00 PM

Yes tragic amusing life :)

Jan Allison

Date: 9/21/2014 9:23:00 AM

oh from hero to zero poor Elmer - loved the humour here:-) hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 9/30/2014 5:20:00 PM

Oh I do I write them if I can - I just love humourous writes:-) hugs jan xxx

Richard Breese
Date: 9/30/2014 5:11:00 PM

Thanks. I'm beginning to think you like limericks too.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/21/2014 8:51:00 AM

Nicely penned Limerick with fine humor, Richard

Richard Breese
Date: 9/30/2014 5:12:00 PM

Thank you Dr. Mehta. I hope they are making you giggle.