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Elm and Ivy - With White Wolf

Budgie managed to get me to write again, I am very grateful to him for providing me with the first stanza, he's a wonderful friend :) *** Elm stood regally and rigid. Ivy looked up in awe and said, a little timid: “Ahhhh, to be so big, close to the Sun” Elm nodded with a focused gaze, he was, to be fair, somewhat amazed, and thought to himself: “What harm could it do to allow this slight little weed to wrap around me, gain my sight?” She looked so sweet and small, he was so strong and tall Ivy snug a little closer and in a tight embrace clung for dear life to his twigs, wound her lithe limbs 'round his leaves, entangled him with lovely sprigs. Elm liked that sweet intrusion. It tickled him in many ways: "A little higher now, my dear, just an inch more, yes here." Ivy flexed her fingers, green and poisonous, Elm didn't see through her ambition from his high position. "Oh Elm, I'm almost near your head. Oh Elm, show me your eyes, I will caress your delicious neck with my small leaves?" Ivy wound 'round him in strong embrace, and before long his breathing ceased. Then Ivy eased, for from her high up vantage point, she became queen could see so far she'd never seen. And only then she lost her grip... When Elm broke and crashed Ivy realised she only ruled a Kingdom of soil and dust. *** September 3, 2017 Copyright © White Wolf and Darren White
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Y. Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Hi Darren, I'm glad Rick helped you to start writing again. You and Rick wrote a good collaboration . One must watch out for poison " Ivy" should cause a whole lot of trouble. Excellent job:-) Alexis
White Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 5:57 AM
Thanks for the compliment, Alexis :)
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September 5, 2017 at 7:02 PM
Oh I love this from beginning to end. Great collaboration guys :)
White Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:19 AM
Thank you Akkina :)
Warrior Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 5:58 PM
Hey, it's Wolfie and Penguino...I'm glad Budgie, got you to write again my friend...great Collab...keep it up...god bless...^WW^
White Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:19 AM
The brothers White, animal brothers, haha, thanks WW
Rodrigues Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:56 PM
Love love love this! Great humor and insight! Oh what tangles, tantalizes, surprises! Great work, my friends! Fave!
White Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:18 AM
Wow, Kim, thanks for the fav!!
Wolf Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 9:57 PM
Better late than never!!! I so love what you have done with this, Duir!!!
White Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:18 AM
Lol, Budgie, how do you like the picture?
Pett Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 5:18 AM
Brilliant, you and White Wolf are so clever and creative, I enjoyed this from start to finish. :))
White Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 3:17 AM
Thanks so much Roy :)
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September 3, 2017 at 10:24 PM
This is so creative and original, I have to add, I sure wish I was a tree!!!! :)
White Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:23 AM
It's fun, isn't it :) Thanks my friend!
Cresswell Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 1:03 PM
A very serious lesson in life; "Beware the tyranny of the weak." Very well done using nature as an example.The elms hubris the ivies mendacity.
White Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:23 AM
Hehe, I love the comment :)
Lane Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 11:34 AM
Sure blame it on the woman for being a clinging vine. haha I'm teasing. This is so wonderful in its lesson as only the two of you can so adeptly do. Ok now, Budgie...we'll all know who to call when our muse takes a siesta.
White Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 1:24 AM
Yeah, I agree it's horrible, but Ivy is SUCH a feminine name ;)
Smith Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 8:38 AM
An amazing write and moral gents....great to see you writing my friend
White Avatar
September 3, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Thanks so much my friend :) Enjoy your weekend!
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