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Ellen's Frame

I see her picture at the end of my hall And steady myself by touching the wall The frame is gaudy as if it has meaning And it calls to me with each day’s leaning With purpose I travel to make it straight As if that picture and I have a date The old pine floor has a familiar creak As my worn-out slippers make it speak The floor it talks as I move to her It tells of times as they once were I call that walk, my footsteps of fate And I listen to them as I make it straight 3/4/18

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Date: 4/4/2018 11:54:00 PM
Back with most deserved congrats, Jerry.
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Date: 4/1/2018 4:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I like the imagery of this. A well-written story.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/2/2018 3:43:00 AM
Thanks and I must leave now for I have a date.
Date: 4/1/2018 10:52:00 AM
A mysterious tilting of the head as our remembrances call us to "spend a moment". Nicely done Jerry and thanks for entering the contest
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/2/2018 3:44:00 AM
And a nod to you for hosting the contest.
Date: 3/4/2018 8:58:00 AM
A beautifully captured journey of the heart. Deeply beautiful in its simplicity. A FAVE for me. Well done, Jerry.
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