Ellen's Cupcake

My thoughts edge out at a slowing pace
From memory to memory with rusted grace  
There’s a picture standing beside my chair
It strains my thought and harbors my stare

The photo itself, a grayed black and white
It’s perfectly framed in the autumn light
There we are on a bench on a pier
I remember neither from yesteryear

There in my palm is a warm cupcake
An offering to her, its hers to take 
Her smile and eyes suggest warmth too
Once more I wonder if she knew
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Barden Avatar
February 15, 2018 at 10:17 PM
Wonderfully charming and whimsical write, Jerry, and so deserving of its placement! Blessings and congrats, my friend! :-)
Hackett Avatar
February 16, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Thank you very much,
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Memories can warm the heart! Congratulations, Jerry!
Hackett Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 3:43 AM
Great reply, thanks
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 1:04 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Jerry. Well done.
Hackett Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 3:43 AM
Thanks again
Cozart Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 11:38 AM
This is beautiful! Congrats.
Hackett Avatar
February 5, 2018 at 3:44 AM
Dale, thanks
Ashley Avatar
February 4, 2018 at 11:32 AM
A beautifully expressed poem of moving and tender sentiments, Jerry. Your lovely rhythm and rhyme eased me gracefully through your touching write. Congratulations on your second place win! Warmest wishes ~Susan
Hackett Avatar
February 6, 2018 at 7:42 AM
Susan, Thank you very much.
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February 3, 2018 at 2:12 PM
- I think she feels it .... a lovely poem, Jerry :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Hackett Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 4:23 PM
Thanks for such a thoughtful comment, take care.
Gauthier Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 8:40 AM
Touching poem. I enjoyed it, Jerry.
Hackett Avatar
February 3, 2018 at 4:21 PM
Thanks Line
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