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Ellen's Cupcake

My thoughts edge out at a slowing pace From memory to memory with rusted grace There’s a picture standing beside my chair It strains my thought and harbors my stare The photo itself, a grayed black and white It’s perfectly framed in the autumn light There we are on a bench on a pier I remember neither from yesteryear There in my palm is a warm cupcake An offering to her, its hers to take Her smile and eyes suggest warmth too Once more I wonder if she knew

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/15/2018 10:17:00 PM
Wonderfully charming and whimsical write, Jerry, and so deserving of its placement! Blessings and congrats, my friend! :-)
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/16/2018 2:51:00 PM
Thank you very much,
Date: 2/4/2018 5:37:00 PM
Memories can warm the heart! Congratulations, Jerry!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2018 3:43:00 AM
Great reply, thanks
Date: 2/4/2018 1:04:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Jerry. Well done.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2018 3:43:00 AM
Thanks again
Date: 2/4/2018 11:38:00 AM
This is beautiful! Congrats.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2018 3:44:00 AM
Dale, thanks
Date: 2/4/2018 11:32:00 AM
A beautifully expressed poem of moving and tender sentiments, Jerry. Your lovely rhythm and rhyme eased me gracefully through your touching write. Congratulations on your second place win! Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/6/2018 7:42:00 AM
Susan, Thank you very much.
Date: 2/3/2018 2:12:00 PM
- I think she feels it .... a lovely poem, Jerry :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/3/2018 4:23:00 PM
Thanks for such a thoughtful comment, take care.
Date: 2/3/2018 8:40:00 AM
Touching poem. I enjoyed it, Jerry.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/3/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thanks Line

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