Ellen

A girl i desire an ancient flame rekindled sincere warmth impaled, there the whole day perfection a place i ne'er want to leave. © Harry j Horsman 2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2013 11:28:00 PM

Harry, , I did not want to leave you out of my Happy Jolly Momment.. Sending you a Christmas Carol.... -- Dashing through the snow In a one horse open sleigh O'er the fields we go Laughing all the way Bells on bob tails ring Making spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing A sleighing song tonight Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh HEY! :) <-- You got to love it I do hope you sang with me... Goodnight my friend... LINDA

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/6/2013 9:48:00 AM

It's call romance of romance, sweetly worded the honey truth. Thanks for all the comments. Loved always,bl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/6/2013 7:31:00 AM

Ahhh!!! So romantic..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/1/2013 7:39:00 PM

Sounds comfortable and full of joy; haven't heard the name Ellen for a long time, brings back memories of someone I knew. Lovely as always Harry! :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/1/2013 10:59:00 AM

an ancient flame rekindled..i love these words you used to describe this reviving passion..lovely

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/27/2013 9:48:00 AM

nicely done harry ;}

Audrey Haick

Date: 2/26/2013 12:35:00 PM

: ) Beautiful thoughts that warm any heart, Harry. Always, Annalise

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/26/2013 7:23:00 AM

Tell me more, sounds like an intresting story Harry.

Painted Hunter

Date: 2/25/2013 1:57:00 PM

Love that middle line!...nice tanka, harry

Sukmawati Komala

Date: 2/24/2013 10:16:00 PM

this is so amazing my fav poet Harry..so lovely and fabulous poem,, enjoyed so very much my dearest friend <3 <3 <3 much luv and hugs :)

Donna Jones

Date: 2/24/2013 7:17:00 PM

The whole day perfection...doesn't get better than that..lovely

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/24/2013 5:43:00 PM

a woman and a place in memory. So nice, Harry. Ellen is my sister's middle name. pretty name!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/24/2013 2:13:00 PM

Dear Harry, that's the spirit! There is still a lot of fire! we have a lot of things to show to the younger generation. Beautiful poem, real and touching!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/24/2013 1:16:00 PM

Do not leave ..... - Like it, Harry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/24/2013 1:06:00 PM

My dear Harry...check your last line! You are missing a V in the word never! ;) I need to give this Ellen a good talking to and tell her to shape up and let you back into her life because you ROCK! :)