Ellen

A girl i desire
an ancient flame rekindled
sincere warmth impaled,
there the whole day perfection
a place i ne'er want to leave.

© Harry j Horsman 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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December 25, 2013 at 11:28 PM
Harry, , I did not want to leave you out of my Happy Jolly Momment.. Sending you a Christmas Carol.... -- Dashing through the snow In a one horse open sleigh O'er the fields we go Laughing all the way Bells on bob tails ring Making spirits bright What fun it is to laugh and sing A sleighing song tonight Oh, jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh Jingle bells, jingle bells Jingle all the way Oh, what fun it is to ride In a one horse open sleigh HEY! :) <-- You got to love it I do hope you sang with me... Goodnight my friend... LINDA
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March 6, 2013 at 9:48 AM
It's call romance of romance, sweetly worded the honey truth. Thanks for all the comments. Loved always,bl
Kendrick Avatar
March 6, 2013 at 7:31 AM
Ahhh!!! So romantic..Enjoyed reading this morn..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara
Wesley Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 7:39 PM
Sounds comfortable and full of joy; haven't heard the name Ellen for a long time, brings back memories of someone I knew. Lovely as always Harry! :)
Chircop Avatar
March 1, 2013 at 10:59 AM
an ancient flame rekindled..i love these words you used to describe this reviving passion..lovely
Duncan Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 9:48 AM
nicely done harry ;}
Haick Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 12:35 PM
: ) Beautiful thoughts that warm any heart, Harry. Always, Annalise
Lamoureux Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 7:23 AM
Tell me more, sounds like an intresting story Harry.
Hunter Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 1:57 PM
Love that middle line!...nice tanka, harry
Komala Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 10:16 PM
this is so amazing my fav poet Harry..so lovely and fabulous poem,, enjoyed so very much my dearest friend <3 <3 <3 much luv and hugs :)
Jones Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 7:17 PM
The whole day perfection...doesn't get better than that..lovely
Dietrich Avatar
February 24, 2013 at 5:43 PM
a woman and a place in memory. So nice, Harry. Ellen is my sister's middle name. pretty name!
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February 24, 2013 at 2:13 PM
Dear Harry, that's the spirit! There is still a lot of fire! we have a lot of things to show to the younger generation. Beautiful poem, real and touching!
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February 24, 2013 at 1:16 PM
Do not leave ..... - Like it, Harry! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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February 24, 2013 at 1:06 PM
My dear Harry...check your last line! You are missing a V in the word never! ;) I need to give this Ellen a good talking to and tell her to shape up and let you back into her life because you ROCK! :)
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