Eve Roper Poet Monorhyme

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Ella S Lullabies 3

Ella’s Lullabies


twilight wanes with a child’s fascination 

lullabies  that deeply moves   papa’s  admiration  

dreams of generation inheritance      inspiration

powerful bond drawn     with love     tears creation

values taught us       with their loving hands         determination

3/27/2016

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Paul Callus April 4, 2016 at 10:47 AM Excellent, Eve!! One of the very best winning entries. Congratulations!! hugs // paul

Jan Allison March 31, 2016 at 12:52 PM Dropping back with my congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Balveen Cheema March 31, 2016 at 1:49 AM Admirable!Eve, congrats on this inspirational write!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 31, 2016 at 12:31 AM Congrats on ur deserved top podium with this awesome write Eve..

Beautiful Scars March 30, 2016 at 9:16 PM Eve, this is the greatest usage of monorhyme in the contest. This touched my heart very deeply. Thank you for sharing and for being a part of my contest :)-luloo Eve Roper March 30, 2016 at 10:39 PM Thank you, Laura, the picture said everything that need to be said!!! The same admiration my granddaughter has for her papa. Thank you for creating a poem for the picture. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison March 28, 2016 at 7:05 AM So beautiful and touching Eve :-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison March 28, 2016 at 2:10 PM I think she is going to find the contest very emotional to judge:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper March 28, 2016 at 1:58 PM Thank you, Jan, I hope Laura likes it:-) Hugs Eve

Jill Spagnola March 28, 2016 at 2:08 AM I am still smiling...just an awesome shared cherished moment :), with love, jill Eve Roper March 28, 2016 at 2:03 PM Thank you so much, Jill, Hugs Eve