Elevator Music

A woman danced up and down my street,
she moved so wildly to her own beat,
while she was whirling around,
my heart did begin to pound...
her crazy dancing turned indiscreet!


10/03/2015

For "So I thought of this line" contest sponsored by Francine Roberts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 24, 2015 at 3:19 AM
Nice win
Aul Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 11:25 AM
Thank you as always SKAT................ George
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November 23, 2015 at 9:18 PM
Great write! Congratulations on your win!
Aul Avatar
November 24, 2015 at 11:24 AM
Thank you for the kind words.............. George
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November 22, 2015 at 11:24 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work George!
Aul Avatar
November 23, 2015 at 10:38 AM
Thank you for the kind words.............. George
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