Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

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For The Man In The Elevator Contest sponsor Charles Medina

Elevator Laughs CM

The man in the elevator was all a flush
A lady just told him pull your zipper up

He hadn’t noticed his fly was open wide
For looking at a woman he thought a DD breast size

He turned facing the rear to quickly zip it up
But then unluckily dear his Willy got stuck

He let out a scream and then passed gas
The people weren’t mean but all had to laugh

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Paula Goldsmith December 1, 2025 at 11:43 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write again. Have a fun day with your win.............. Karen Jones December 1, 2025 at 11:58 AM Thanks

Charles Messina December 1, 2025 at 10:26 AM LOL- So cute and funny, Karen. I have to admit I have been caught with my zip down once or twice, but never in an elevator (lol). Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Charlie Karen Jones December 1, 2025 at 10:29 AM Thanks for my placement and I am embarrassed to admit I always notice unzipped pants lol

Sotto Poet December 1, 2025 at 6:55 AM So funny, dear Karen, congratulations on your contest win, well-deserved. Karen Jones December 1, 2025 at 9:33 AM Thanks dear Sotto!

Janice Canerdy December 1, 2025 at 6:44 AM OUCH! Karen, CONGRATS on your win! Janice Karen Jones December 1, 2025 at 9:32 AM Thanks Janice.

Krish Radhakrishna November 2, 2025 at 1:34 PM Good one Karen! Never trust the man in the elevator! All the best in the contest! Karen Jones November 2, 2025 at 2:09 PM Thank you Krish!

Paula Goldsmith November 2, 2025 at 12:32 PM What a fun write. Thanks for the laugh. I needed it. "Good Luck" Thanks for writing on my Elevator write. Have a great/fun day writing away............. Karen Jones November 2, 2025 at 2:09 PM Thanks Paula! Happy writing!

Beryl Edmonds October 30, 2025 at 2:02 PM That’s so funny Karen, I read it to my hubby, we both had a laugh… Beryl Karen Jones October 30, 2025 at 2:39 PM Awwww! So glad y'all laughed!