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Elevated Escape

beating in rhythm with the sea, like how your words move wild and free
                                 breaths are elevated
                                                 as this escape holds you,
                                                        - so much deeper into me
                                               (yes, i could fall into you)
                                                             into your love

my heart- it begins to race, simply imagining your lips with grace
                             softly and ever so lightly,
                          in those sweet ever after kisses
                lingering upon delicate moments, of my face

in a poetic whisper, like the melody of the wind- i am captivated again
                beyond your song, the beauty of where i belong
                    as the symphony of this, holds me in bliss

                                          i need to stay
                                            i long to be

                                    - your poetry -

                                 breaths are elevated
                                                 as this escape holds you,
                                                        - so much deeper into me
                                               (yes, i could fall into you)
                                                             into your love
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~ Love is.. reaching for you- beyond words, beyond the sky ~
A little scribble inspired by whispers along the wind

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Joseph May June 10, 2023 at 8:14 AM Nature's rhythm intertwines with the heartbeat of love, Wonderful write Brandy, Hugs Brandy Nicole June 10, 2023 at 4:28 PM Your comment is so beautiful and poetic. Thank you, Joseph. The escape is breathtaking. You are your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Lyric Man November 3, 2018 at 8:35 AM Deeply moving love write.. inspires another song! Brandy Nicole November 3, 2018 at 7:38 PM Thank you Lyric Man!! It seems another lyric poem has been created. :) Brandy

Harry Horsman November 1, 2018 at 5:19 PM I'm spellbound, amazing poetry, in fact Shelley, himself, would have loved to have wrote this gem.. Brandy Nicole November 1, 2018 at 7:03 PM Your thoughts humble me. Thank you harry. Such a wonderful thing to say to me. I am speechless. ~ Brandy

Tobey Hill October 31, 2018 at 2:49 PM Good afternoon ma'am. This is a beautiful piece that I enjoyed reading. Like the melody of the wind. Wonderful! TAH Brandy Nicole October 31, 2018 at 5:24 PM Dear Tobey, you are kind and such a gentleman. Thank you for your lovely comment. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Charles Messina October 30, 2018 at 9:25 PM Absolutely beautiful, Brandy. You sure do have a way with words. Like Sylvia said, I could see this one set to music, in fact, I'm singing it too...lol I can feel the warmth in your heart... ~ Charlie Brandy Nicole October 30, 2018 at 9:57 PM :) Awe, thank you Charlie. I am smiling knowing that you are singing. Such a sweet thing to say about me and my poetry. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock October 30, 2018 at 10:25 AM This is not just beautiful as is all your poetry,Brandy.It is also so lyrical I could see it set to music as a romantic love song.I’m already singing it in my head A lovely clever piece.Thank you for touching my heart and soul.A favourite for me. Brandy Nicole October 30, 2018 at 11:29 AM You are soooo sweet June. You always bring a smile with your kind words and compliments. :) Thank you for saying you can see this placed to music. I feel the melody as well, in my heart. I appreciate you favoring this little scribble of mine. It means so much to me. Thank you for being You. ~ Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden October 30, 2018 at 2:26 AM This is wonderful, Brandy, many layers of ambiguity and exquisite expression - love it! You certainly have the men of The Soup in poetically pliable pieces, lol ... blessings, Dear Friend, I pray this finds you well! (I so wish I had more time to read, but I am up against it now, and run ragged ... someday - you will be the top of that list when the day comes). ;-) <3 Brandy Nicole October 30, 2018 at 9:51 AM Thank you Greg. I appreciate you stopping by to read this little scribble of mine. It seems thoughts along the wind create many moments within, with many here. :) I am softly smiling at you. All is well in my world. I know moments are busy in yours. I wish you the best, my friend. Always. ~ Brandy

Lyric Man October 29, 2018 at 4:00 PM Lips beyond imagination.. you are a fasicanation.. a poetry. Whisper all you want, but fall.. fall into me. In my love, girl I promise.. to set you free. Believe! Brandy Nicole October 29, 2018 at 7:27 PM You are as poetic as me, when leaving thoughts upon poetry. :) And falling without wings, is worth the fall- when you are falling into the love of one willing to catch you. I believe Lyric Man!! And I am falling. ~ Brandy

Richard Lamoureux October 29, 2018 at 9:31 AM This is like that Regae song “Feelin Hot Hot Hot!” Brandy Nicole October 29, 2018 at 1:25 PM :) Perhaps it is. Soft smile. Thank you Richard. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior October 29, 2018 at 6:52 AM Your escape brings me to a high elevation lol...'when your high, you never what to come down'...lovely verse my friend...love & light...^WW^ Brandy Nicole October 29, 2018 at 1:23 PM :) Thank you Winged Warrior. I appreciate you and your kind words. You belong in the Stars my sweet friend. Keep smiling. Love and Poetry. ~ Brandy

John Gondolf October 28, 2018 at 7:01 AM Brandy, this is such a sweet love poem with beautiful moments of love throughout and a hint of sensuality. Breathtaking poetry my friend. All the best. Brandy Nicole October 28, 2018 at 3:22 PM Thank you John. :) Love is a whisper along the wind, touching every moment. Your kind words bring a smile. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit October 28, 2018 at 7:00 AM Yes, indeed..your poem reaches beyond words..and captures hearts and minds. Flowery and perfumed..delicate and loving..artfully rendered. Kudos Brandy for your talented whispers. Brandy Nicole October 28, 2018 at 3:20 PM You always say such wonderful things about my poetic whispers. :) Thank you Vijay. Perhaps my words hold the scent of a flower. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

John Hamilton October 27, 2018 at 9:27 PM More than a little scribble this is poetic magnificence, love the refrain, makes this very melodic, loved it! Brandy Nicole October 28, 2018 at 3:08 PM :) Thank you John. This feels like a song to me, it did after the words caressed the page. Your thoughts are so kind and appreciated. ~ Brandy