Elephant

I am an elephant, I can't forget and what I can't forget is gone from me, will not return and still I yearn for what I can't forget.

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Fabiyas M V

Date: 11/25/2018 5:45:00 AM

Nice! Also, thanks for appreciating for my work!

Sherry Asbury

Date: 11/4/2018 6:06:00 AM

Clever and witty - could apply to Old Poets too...

Becca Teagan

Date: 10/14/2018 11:00:00 PM

haha I love it :)

Anil Deo

Date: 7/6/2018 5:16:00 PM

I couldn't forget a lady from another time & place ... existential questions made sentimental dedication to a first love a luxury I couldn't afford. But who but YOU could put it aptly for us in the Land filled with Telephants. LOL! Stay well in PACE

Phil Capitano
Date: 7/7/2018 7:52:00 PM

Thanks Anil you always bring a smile when you visit. Peace.

Silent One

Date: 6/27/2018 8:34:00 AM

Deep stuff..

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/26/2018 10:32:00 AM

I like it :) xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/25/2018 1:51:00 PM

Good one, Phil.