Elements Water

Condensing ice 
Covered snow,
Shapes of white 
Crystallization flow,
Watering the earth 
From heaven’s door,
Precipitation 
Upon the floor,
Invigorate refresh 
Excite and more,
A constant running 
Ebbing poured,
Hydration needed 
Drink absorbed,
Requisite required 
For essential growth,
Spring time flowers 
Not too late
Watered by 
An Impermeable lake,
Drinking waters 
As they wake.
Life’s recycled 
Exhilarate and intoxicate.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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April 27, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Wendy, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
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May 4, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Thank you Poet xxxxxxxxxxx
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April 23, 2016 at 12:13 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
Rycroft Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 1:05 PM
Thank you BL sorry for the delay xxx
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 9:17 PM
I think this is wonderful Wendy and would have had it much higher. You fit all the words in so smoothly, something I struggled with in my poem. Hugs, Connie :)
Rycroft Avatar
April 19, 2016 at 3:08 AM
Thank you Connie xxxx
A. Sharma Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 10:26 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Wendy ..
Rycroft Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:19 PM
Thank you Dr Sharma xxxx
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 3:15 PM
Hi Wendy, congratulations on your placement in the Element of Water contest. Amazing how you used all those required words in so few line! Hugs, Sandra
Rycroft Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:22 PM
Thank you Sandra xxxxx
Scars Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Wendy, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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April 18, 2016 at 3:23 PM
Thank you Laura xxxxxxxx
Davey Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on your HM in my Water Element contest with a wonderful write on water! Thank you for entering
Rycroft Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Thank you Brian xxxxxx The pleasure all mine xxxxxx
La France Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Wendy, you have penned a lovely write for the contest, well done ~
Rycroft Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 5:33 AM
Thank you hope I've got it right x
Dietrich Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 1:04 PM
a very nice one. Good luck in this contest, Wendy.
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April 3, 2016 at 2:48 PM
Thank you Andrea x
Allison Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 10:53 AM
Well done Wendy you wove in the required words so cleverly:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Rycroft Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 11:11 AM
Thanks Jan xxxxx
Stebbings Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:59 AM
Nice, Wendy, I like this piece. Barry
Rycroft Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 10:08 AM
Thank you Barry don't know how I did it xxxxxx
Underwood Avatar
April 3, 2016 at 9:59 AM
A great poem Wendy
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April 3, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Thank you very much don't know how I did it must of been a miracle xxxx Ha Ha
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