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Elements Water

Condensing ice Covered snow, Shapes of white Crystallization flow, Watering the earth From heaven’s door, Precipitation Upon the floor, Invigorate refresh Excite and more, A constant running Ebbing poured, Hydration needed Drink absorbed, Requisite required For essential growth, Spring time flowers Not too late Watered by An Impermeable lake, Drinking waters As they wake. Life’s recycled Exhilarate and intoxicate.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/27/2016 11:59:00 PM
Wendy, Congrats on your win. XOX ~LINDA~
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 5/4/2016 1:06:00 PM
Thank you Poet xxxxxxxxxxx
Date: 4/23/2016 12:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 5/4/2016 1:05:00 PM
Thank you BL sorry for the delay xxx
Date: 4/18/2016 9:17:00 PM
I think this is wonderful Wendy and would have had it much higher. You fit all the words in so smoothly, something I struggled with in my poem. Hugs, Connie :)
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/19/2016 3:08:00 AM
Thank you Connie xxxx
Date: 4/17/2016 10:26:00 PM
Congrats on superb win with this exquisite write Wendy ..
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/18/2016 3:19:00 PM
Thank you Dr Sharma xxxx
Date: 4/17/2016 3:15:00 PM
Hi Wendy, congratulations on your placement in the Element of Water contest. Amazing how you used all those required words in so few line! Hugs, Sandra
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/18/2016 3:22:00 PM
Thank you Sandra xxxxx
Date: 4/17/2016 11:46:00 AM
Wendy, congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/18/2016 3:23:00 PM
Thank you Laura xxxxxxxx
Date: 4/17/2016 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your HM in my Water Element contest with a wonderful write on water! Thank you for entering
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/18/2016 3:24:00 PM
Thank you Brian xxxxxx The pleasure all mine xxxxxx
Date: 4/3/2016 3:40:00 PM
Wendy, you have penned a lovely write for the contest, well done ~
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/4/2016 5:33:00 AM
Thank you hope I've got it right x
Date: 4/3/2016 1:04:00 PM
a very nice one. Good luck in this contest, Wendy.
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/3/2016 2:48:00 PM
Thank you Andrea x
Date: 4/3/2016 10:53:00 AM
Well done Wendy you wove in the required words so cleverly:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/3/2016 11:11:00 AM
Thanks Jan xxxxx
Date: 4/3/2016 9:59:00 AM
A great poem Wendy
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/3/2016 10:06:00 AM
Thank you very much don't know how I did it must of been a miracle xxxx Ha Ha
Date: 4/3/2016 9:59:00 AM
Nice, Wendy, I like this piece. Barry
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Wendy Rycroft
Date: 4/3/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thank you Barry don't know how I did it xxxxxx

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