Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Elements Part 4: Fire

ELEMENTS Part 4: Fire Contest
Sponsor: Brian Davey

Flames of distraction feeding my hunger
Inspires me ‘til the rain causes thunder
Rousing on a chilled night during autumn
Elegant candles, so glad you brought em’

Kindle of Venus gleaming in my heart,
shimmering endeavor, hands lighting sparks,
flares unbearable with passionate hands,
seems like our blazing glint has changed our plans.

Burning shimmers with a kiss on my cheek,
your ignition remains to make me weak,
our dazzling glow connects my soul to yours,
do you think we should take this fire indoors?

You’ve inspired my core to scorch with desire,
baby, thanks for seething me with your fire.


Sonnet Syllables: Ten syllables per line
checked at: howmanysyllables.com
Total # of syllables:  140 syllables
Total # of words:  101

Date Written: April 18, 2016

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Brian Cecil May 11, 2016 at 4:45 PM A good one as usual Brian. Loved the Venus line. Brian Cecil May 11, 2016 at 4:48 PM I pasted the wrong comment LOL. My apologize. But the Venus line I added. Loved that line

Anisha Dutta May 6, 2016 at 6:57 AM Congrats Laura on great win. Hugs

Balveen Cheema May 5, 2016 at 5:04 AM Luloo, congrats on your wonderful placement in Brian Davey's Elements # 4 -Fire contest!

Bl Devnath May 4, 2016 at 9:47 AM Congratulation on your beautiful win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Tom Quigley May 4, 2016 at 9:26 AM Beautifu and passionate. Very nice write!

Karam Misra May 4, 2016 at 8:06 AM Flames - so many connotations! A fine piece of work here. Congratulations on your win, Laura. ~ kc ~

Joseph May May 4, 2016 at 6:59 AM Congrats on a fine win Laura

Joanna Daniel May 4, 2016 at 3:24 AM Congratulations on a great win Laura:) Beautiful Scars May 4, 2016 at 11:14 AM many thanks Jo! :)-luloo

Brian Davey May 3, 2016 at 8:33 PM Yes Laura I do think this fire needs to be Yes Yes Laura I think this fire should be taken outdoors! Congrats on your placement in my elements contest with this hearts on fire tale of passion! Beautiful Scars May 4, 2016 at 11:15 AM thank you Brian for my placement! I really enjoyed this contest! be blessed :)-luloo Beautiful Scars May 4, 2016 at 11:14 AM thank you Brian for my placement! I really enjoyed this contest! be blessed :)-luloo

Sandra Haight May 3, 2016 at 6:31 PM Hi Luloo, back to congratulate you on your wonderful placement in the element of fire contest! Well done! Hugs, Sandra Beautiful Scars May 4, 2016 at 11:12 AM thank you sweet lady :)-luloo

Balveen Cheema April 29, 2016 at 1:43 PM Wonderfully done Lullo! Ood Luck!

Sandra Haight April 18, 2016 at 5:09 PM I like your take on the contest theme of 'fire', Laura. Outside the box, and beautifully written for sure! Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra Beautiful Scars April 18, 2016 at 6:25 PM thank you Sandra :)-luloo

Connie Marcum Wong April 18, 2016 at 3:43 PM Wow Luloo, this contest has certainly inspired the passion in you. A very clever and enchanting entry for the contest! I am sure to see this one up in lights! #7 ; ) Beautiful Scars April 18, 2016 at 6:24 PM thank you Connie :)-luloo

Christopher Goss April 18, 2016 at 2:48 PM Scorching! Very well written! Beautiful Scars April 18, 2016 at 6:23 PM thank you Christophe :)-luloo

Jan Allison April 18, 2016 at 2:22 PM woo hoo Luloo you sure are igniting the flames of passion here! Good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Beautiful Scars April 18, 2016 at 6:23 PM thank you Jan :)-luloo