-----------Elementary Love----------

Fate knew best, as fingers intertwined souls weaving…bringing elements together A patch of soil, a whisper in the wind a blackened storm, wish ablaze-- finding love ~***~ Earth embraced slumbered seed nurturing it making room for it, and letting it grow Through the years, this tree stood steadfast…solid rooted deeply yet pliant, humbly strong Air carries tall tree’s wish soars, touches stars that whisper to the Heavens, blow kisses Leaves dance, flirt with breeze in constant motion seasons fly on, lives pass by, granted wish Rain water: a blessing, tree soaks it in never drowning, drinking in happiness Its wood sails in the sea of memories, waves then crash in until it reaches shore Flames burn free, fire licks...feels, ravages wood. Tree’s ultimate sacrifice, exhausted Glowing embers now remain, gives soft light just the right heat, warming souls that need it ~***~ He was that awesome tree. He always said, "You are elementary in my life." It is only now that I understand… I was his Earth. Air. Water. Fire--Light. Love. --for Chris' Double the Fun~ (Tetractys) contest--
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Oyewole Avatar
April 16, 2013 at 5:39 AM
Congrats on this wonderful win... This pen is beautiful~A.O
A   Avatar
April 15, 2013 at 9:35 PM
Hi Nikko, a nice and awesome win... Congratulations with your awesome #1. I love many of Andrea's favorite poems. always~ Good Night* PD
Sister Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 6:19 PM
You made me cry, that is hard to do! J.
Johnson Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 5:47 PM
Your talent is obvious in these verses. Congratuations on your win. Love, joyce
Gasun Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 12:19 PM
Great poem and great form! Big warm congratulations on your grand win my dear Enn. Thanks a lot for sharing as well. love and hugs, Leonora
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 14, 2013 at 10:42 AM
many congratulations on your double win enn pee first as a fave and now this and always a winner in my book xx
A   Avatar
October 21, 2011 at 9:51 AM
air air,,, i want to breath... love it...nikko....
Wesley Avatar
September 13, 2011 at 8:00 PM
Loved reading this intriguing verse. The setup is fascinating and a message that delights the mind.
Brown Avatar
June 21, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Congratulations on your win in Chris's "Double The Fun" contest Nikko. Love, Carol
Maverick Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 11:55 AM
Enjoyed reading your outstanding poem Nikko, i think it should score high..
Mister Roboto Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 6:00 PM
this is a very intriguing shape with an original piece of writing within. Are Tetractys difficult to fabricate? Would a poem like this be something one would have a difficult time teaching to children?
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 3:34 PM
My congratulations on the third place win in the contest, nikko
Phookan Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 12:28 PM
Thanks nikko, I hope I did it well in time not sure but you guys are sweetest, winning now is not so much important to me but having friends like you is,hey no getting so mushy :))..and now lets come to this-- Great work nikko!!! like a series of painting from the stage of a seed to the glowing embers, you've most beautifully shown the journey of this tree and loved how you ended it in the last set..A very well deserved win..Congrats to you , huggs, gautami
Long Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 7:40 AM
congrats on your win with this fine piece cory
Neels Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:02 AM
hehe, I see you did adhere to the "fire" thing.. Congratulations Missy on your awesome win *mwahugs*
Poet Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 12:08 AM
Congratulations Nikko....this is excellent.
Dietrich Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 10:01 PM
wowie zowie, you did it, Nikko, you worked long and hard and scored big with this beauty. I'm proud of you with this one, one of your best! congratulations.
Onclaud Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 9:58 PM
aha, the "novelette" shines... haneps! raving KUDOS to you for the special win, nikks :) huggs,
Roberts Avatar
June 18, 2011 at 9:23 PM
congrats on your win in Chriss contest Nikko, wonderful piece
A   Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 9:02 PM
wonderful Nikko,,, you pulled it off for chri's contest,,, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 8:13 PM
WOW, Nikko, This is ROCKING, one of your best ever. tAking the elements and pulling them all together to make a love story. Amazing and I will be shocked if it's not top three, well if not even first place!! the way you tied it all togther, genius, NIkko. CLARITY with free verse style, that is TRUE poetry.
Devonshire Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Outstanding, Nikko! Love the way you used the elements to bring this love poem to life. Very creative! Best wishes for success in Chris's contest. The tetractys is a wonderful form, isn't it? Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 12:22 PM
Thank you for your kind comments on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to read your wonderful poetry Nikko. Love, Carol
Austin Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 11:19 AM
This layout, like love, a spinning top. Great idea, Nikko, the tree used so symbolically. Birth, evolution, maturity, purpose. Love, daver
Neels Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 8:19 AM
someone went Tetractys crazy I see hehe, I can't decide which one I love best Missy, they all have something going for them.. Which I dig big time ;) All the best for Chris' contest *mwahugs* hehe, what did I do that needs me to play in the rain??? I knew you would love my "between the sheets" lol
K. Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 8:25 AM
somebody went tetractys crazy?? who?! I think Andrea had 10 though... and uh-huh, two can play innocent, haha!
12
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace