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Blinded by the lightening flash, running from the thunder Clash, a hail storms hurricane burns within me, oh am I Lost in the eye of your wake, a single powder cloud set adrift, Amongst your currents of insurgence, I’m powerless. An earth elemental, torn upwards against my will, A heavenly ascender, rocking in the atmosphere, Swaying between the light waves of the earth and sky. A piratical of living energy, clinging upon the tears Of mine own emotions inertia, for raw forces life Support. Nay spiritual resistance is futile, against your loves Passionate storm that beckons unto me, dearest Feel the electrical threads connecting us, lighting up God’s kingdom admits the divine nimbus fields of white. Come hither meld thy moisture with my fire, and let us Merge together, forming elemental giants, torrents Tornado's, brushing against the vaults of heaven. Swirling erotic demon’s suspended in mid-air, Uniting in complete abandonment’s liberal freedom, Amongst the atmosphere, kindred spirits dancing A vaporous waltz of mists desirer's. At the apex of our climate unisons, within the Heights of the heights divides, I’m rudely severed, Tossed into a devotional free fall, as the echoing voices Of pleasures commandments thrash against the cloud Mountains. In silences moments of frozen rapture, I do so lie Upon the cold earthen ground, a tattered shadow Of innocence abandonment, as the waves of an Wakening dreamer, washes over my battered flesh. Thinly the pressure front passes ideally by me, The cruel sun pierces through the black embrace That had entangled my inner being. But I can see his rainbow smiling down upon me, I can feel his soft breezes winds brushing, caressing My blackened tresses, I’m here for thee, in dreams Illusions kingdom of the night, and at flights fancy, We've collide again, for we are the elemental giants, Passions divine spirits of a mightier storm, called love. BY: CHERYL ANNA DUNN

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/30/2015 5:16:00 PM
powerful piece of writing cherl excellent pen as always dear friend
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Date: 1/26/2015 5:29:00 PM
I feel like I've been through a horrific storm and it's all over now...I'm viewing that wonderful rainbow. Well done.
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