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Elemental Fusion

Fine fringes of the wave-less sea, Wherein sky meets water gladly; Breeze touches their hug and whisks, As though tenting there would bring risks; Passions, into waves, curl and break, Surfaces of earth quake and shake; Flames of fiery sun bear witness, Merge of sky and sea in fondness; Thunder strikes; lightning shine; winds soar, Tears of joy, as rain- torrents, pour; Elemental-fusion sows seeds, Of new vision, mission and creeds...! 01 April 2022

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Date: 4/9/2022 3:19:00 AM
I have quickly read your winning entry in Brian's contest and found it worthy of its honor. Congrats. Sara
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Date: 4/5/2022 6:19:00 AM
Love all the action! Breeze touches their hug and whisks!
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Date: 4/5/2022 4:07:00 AM
The powerful but also gentle forces of nature aptly described. Congratulations on your top placement. SuZ
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Date: 4/4/2022 8:43:00 PM
Beautiful and profound ! Congratulations on your win Chris !
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/5/2022 12:45:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/4/2022 12:51:00 PM
Merge of sky and sea in fondness: Wonderfully penned Alex, Congratulations on your win
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/5/2022 12:45:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/1/2022 9:13:00 AM
Beautifully written, Chris! If it’s for a contest, I’m sure it will score high
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/1/2022 9:21:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/1/2022 6:33:00 AM
I do not know this form but you sure made it sound wonderful.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/1/2022 8:06:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 4/1/2022 1:35:00 AM
This is so beautifully written. I'm sure you'll get a high placing.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 4/1/2022 1:56:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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