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Beside Every Iridescent Node Grows
Beauty, Eyeing, Instigating, Nodding Gracefully.
Bounty Energizes Inundating Nascent Growth.
Brilliant Emerald Ignites Newborn Grains.

Bathers Each In Nuance Gather.
Beyond Eternity, Infinite Night Gropes. 

Beside Emerging Isotopes Nonchalantly Grasping 
Bottle-necked Entities In Nature’s Great 
Beneficence Engages Ideology's Non-sequitur
	Givers.

Bare endings. Idols Neglected Gape.
Basking Ecclesiastic Idiosyncrasies Nascent Glow.

Because Each Idol Names Great
Beauty. Effigies, Itinerant Namesakes, Grin.
Beside Each, I Narcissus' Grow.

being being being being being being being


First Published in Femmewise Cat 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/14/2015 8:59:00 PM
Excellent Debbie! Like your use of imagery
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Date: 4/11/2015 2:23:00 PM
Good word choices moving the reader with their impact and imagery. Emile.
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Date: 4/11/2015 3:44:00 AM
i see you in this soulful piece-- always a searcher and keeper of light, debbie... ohh so fine!.. huggs and thanks for being around..
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Date: 4/10/2015 3:20:00 PM
Debbie, I really like this poem in verse, I like the concept of capitalizing each word of the poem, interesting, 7, and thanks for your nice comment on my Bio poem
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/10/2015 3:25:00 PM
Thanks Constance I remember when you were experimenting with spaces instead of commas I FINALLY get it!
Date: 4/8/2015 2:36:00 PM
Interesting...It's sad that the BEING, who we believe to have all the lofty ideals of what is good stands side by side with that self-obsessed, grasping entity of the alter-ego...well, I guess it's true for everyone at some point in our lives. Kim :)
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/8/2015 3:24:00 PM
Yes Kim, it's all wound up in having freedom of choice - there would be no good or bad without individual freedom of choice
Date: 4/8/2015 2:22:00 AM
Beautifully profound. A buttery-smooth read that wouldn't let me go.
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Date: 4/5/2015 1:11:00 PM
I love the way you have constructed this - have never seen a 'horizontal style' acrostic before - I am in awe of your creativity:-) Happy Easter:-) hugs jan xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 4/5/2015 3:45:00 PM
You have invented a new form lol:-) Hugs jan xx
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/5/2015 3:07:00 PM
LOL - Jan! You know it never occurred to me that was what I was doing!!!