Element of Air

Through quiver of night
setting chill to wintry breeze-
frost and flake drift icily

Acrid is this float -
tapping on windows like knocks
while children pray for sunshine.


11.1.2020
Nette Onclaud Contest--Spin a Sedoka
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Agustin Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 12:53 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Roper Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 8:37 PM
2. Phantasmagoria , Triolet poetry form Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh. You don't have a Phantasmagoria poem.
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November 2, 2020 at 8:28 PM
The poem imagery is great and syllable count is perfect, Lyva. Good luck in Nette's contest.
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