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Element of Air

Through quiver of night setting chill to wintry breeze- frost and flake drift icily Acrid is this float - tapping on windows like knocks while children pray for sunshine. 11.1.2020 Nette Onclaud Contest--Spin a Sedoka

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Date: 11/2/2020 8:37:00 PM
2. Phantasmagoria , Triolet poetry form Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh. You don't have a Phantasmagoria poem.
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Date: 11/2/2020 8:28:00 PM
The poem imagery is great and syllable count is perfect, Lyva. Good luck in Nette's contest.
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