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Elegy

Christmas Eve; mired in her melancholy, wrapped in present reveries that she alone may open, though there'll be no new surprises, only loss, and somber songs to accompany the pictures of her son; (forsaken by the light she's not quite ready for exposure.) Crows squawk a chorus in a leaden sky and there's a sprinkling of snow as mourners cluster black and white like so many stoic penguins round the gaping wound of earth. The box so tragically small reverberates, sealing the fate of one taken too early from the fight. Well-wishers scatter to their cars, start up their cell phones, return to Saturdays spent manicuring lawns and custom fingernails. Bereft of a daily blueprint, her aching loss too new for time to render any pleasure, still she has her novels and her neighbors, her crosswords and her cat and a pain deep in her heart for which there is no measure.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/14/2015 5:42:00 AM
I've read a number of your poems now and this one resonates the most. You have managed to 'can' loss from several aspects. Well done Keith. You brought a true sadness of loss that remains at the forefront of daily living
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/14/2015 5:48:00 AM
Thanks for reading my stuff... and espcially for responding to this particular piece. Another review or two would be nice if you have time and inclination! Best wishes, Keith (Might I suggest 'Nightscapes...?' it's patterned on T.S. Eliot's 'Rhapsody On A Windy Night.')
Date: 12/12/2015 8:52:00 PM
you know but I enjoyed the read tonight, very awesome work again, take care cheri
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/13/2015 5:03:00 PM
Thanks again my dear! Your comments are much appreciated. Keith
Date: 12/12/2015 8:50:00 PM
Dear Keith A sad truth of today's reality there are so many souls left forgotten but yet they do exsist in there chambers home of the left behind, and at the end does anyone weep for these the lost maybe for a split second or two, and like you've written they go back to there well cut lawns and reality zones far away and forget all over again, but you know I've found one thing that's so true these same individuals will have this same thing happen to them in the end, I think it's poetic justice,
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Date: 12/10/2015 5:12:00 PM
so sad but so beautiful, keith! there are many lines i absolutely love, but i think the one beginning with "crows squawk a chorus..." is my favorite.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/10/2015 5:49:00 PM
Bless you Ilene... I am very grateful for your kind remarks.

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