elegance unscathed

prestige struts proudly,
pothole tickles-oil giggles,
mechanic claps bills.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2026 at 11:14 PM
Good wit, Akham
Rodrigues Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 8:14 AM
Well done!
Onclaud Avatar
June 5, 2026 at 7:41 AM
so witty, akham...keep going!
Dietrich Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 11:52 PM
Cute clever one!
Daniels Avatar
June 4, 2026 at 12:31 AM
Hahaha, Akham ! So clever this haiku. I enjoyed the alliteration. Yeah, mechanics love to clap bills ~ though they do work hard. Have a beautiful day. X.
Jones Avatar
June 3, 2026 at 10:41 AM
Like how you put this haiku together.
Croft Avatar
June 2, 2026 at 7:25 AM
yes indeed, the bill!
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