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Electronic Peddlers

A Roto-dent toothbrush of mine Once said “Where the heck did you dine?’ there’s bits of Swiss chard Next too white fried cod And pumpkin seeds by your canine? Just then the cell phone ding-a-lings calls out “I’ve got just the thing!’ that new water pick will soon do the trick “Howdy-Do DING-A-LING-ling?”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/16/2011 6:41:00 AM
Very imaginative and cute. Just reading it woke me up today.
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Date: 11/9/2011 6:50:00 AM
I need to take some lessons from you or one of the other true poets on this amazing site! You all seem to pull these off with the greatest of ease. You should see me write Form poetry! It is a joke. While, with poetry (that many don't consider poetic at all, like Verse, FreeVerse) I can rip em' from my ole ribcage in 3-5 minutes anytime! Go figure. You inspire many. Thank you! 7 up from me For your share!
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Date: 10/30/2011 7:21:00 AM
Put a smile on my face this morning Debbie. Thanks for sharing! Steve
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Date: 10/29/2011 3:32:00 PM
Very good Debbie. I like the concept, Tony
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Date: 10/29/2011 10:28:00 AM
* “Tis What I Love About Your Lovely Beauty * Funny, Smart, Sexy * Like A Beautiful Dream * Your Beauty Made Me Smile & Ow, How You Stir Deeply * Beautiful Debbie * Luv * Sarah.” *
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Date: 10/29/2011 9:24:00 AM
LOL, good one. Thanks for your haiku advice, Debs - I'll get the hang of it all eventually : )
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Date: 10/29/2011 8:04:00 AM
Funny....tis the season for pumpkin seeds...I have a pet chicken and she is worse than the dog about eating anything. She ate my decorative pumpkin for the seeds.
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