Electrocution

Electrocution

My fridge is faulty due to careless kate,
touching it,my blood  is drawn at~ fast rate,
She tries tapping ,but stood still;
we glued firm like welded steel,
Fine posture;~ not for John we would  be late.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Bagnall Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 7:17 AM
Giggles !
Song Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 7:11 AM
Perspective IS everything, O. My sister was electrocuted by her refrigerator...it was the most frightening experience ever as the current lifted her off the ground...her kidneys failed and we thot she was going to die...YES, u got it...refrigerators are dangerous...good luck in contest. Gwendolen.
Lane Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 7:03 AM
Shocking! Tony
Smith Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 7:01 AM
Fine Limerick. Sounds like you and Kate are strongly attracted to each other.
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