Electric Novice

Soft dreamy rainfall,
prelude to crackling thunder;
Tempestuous sky;

Attracted to heat 
boorish Storm bothers the Sun,
electric novice;

Going back and forth
argumentative nature, 
hail will never cease;

Camouflage of drops   
design an unskilled picture;
Diamonds in a pond;

The water collects flooding,
a new world waits to unfold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Bartley Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 11:11 AM
Thanks for sharing. I'm not qualified to really give much more. I like this. Real poetry.
Udaeta Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 11:54 AM
Top tier compliment to call it real. Thank you for stopping by to read. Blessings.
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