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Electric Novice

Soft dreamy rainfall, prelude to crackling thunder; Tempestuous sky; Attracted to heat boorish Storm bothers the Sun, electric novice; Going back and forth argumentative nature, hail will never cease; Camouflage of drops design an unskilled picture; Diamonds in a pond; The water collects flooding, a new world waits to unfold.

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Date: 8/29/2024 11:11:00 AM
Thanks for sharing. I'm not qualified to really give much more. I like this. Real poetry.
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Melani Udaeta
Date: 8/29/2024 11:54:00 AM
Top tier compliment to call it real. Thank you for stopping by to read. Blessings.

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