Electric

The electricity that passes through electric guitars
Is alive with power and juice
The rhythm is so good exciting
Like eating the forbidden fruit

The kings of the blues 
Can control the power of the ways
Like Joe Bonamassa
Each and every day

So why am I so lonely
As I have the music of the Gods
Maybe it’s my acoustic
Yes the masters nod

So it's electric that follows me
deep into the night
where Hell will be my friend
for whatever the fright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Johnson Avatar
June 21, 2023 at 2:27 AM
Congrats, Robert. Nice choice; nice job. I chose the word 'electricity', but the contest closed before I posted. Blessings.
Goldsmith Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 2:10 PM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Music makes the world go round. Have a great day.............
Fowler Avatar
June 20, 2023 at 7:44 AM
Nice Robert! Great blues guitar. Congratulations on your win. :)
La France Avatar
June 16, 2023 at 3:13 AM
Robert, you sure love Joe and his guitar, he is very good !
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