Elders

Elders once had wisdom,
Which is what was always taught,
So they were treated with respect;
Advice from them was sought.

Their years of life provided
The experience they’d learned
And there was satisfaction
When that knowledge was returned.

Yet that’s no longer valid,
For intelligence is gleaned
Artificially and so
The human aspect’s been demeaned.

Nowadays, to be an elder
Is to realize no one cares,
For our input isn’t valued
By our progeny or heirs.

As a consolation, maybe,
For so many years alive,
Elders get a senior discount
Once they’ve aged to sixty-five.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Vaso Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 11:56 PM
I think elders are very valued, the ones with empathy and compassion, often leaders, not in power, but in communities, however what is more sad for me these days, is children have to tell their elders how to behave. The silence on genocide is deafening.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 12:55 PM
Unfortunately this can be all so true!
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