Elate Your Mate

"Forty acres and a mule"
Was a promise, not a rule
Government lies
So you baptise
Just like any other fool
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Nicholsen Avatar
November 20, 2022 at 3:20 AM
very cunningly expressed loved reading this hugs
Kaufman Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 7:35 AM
Very clever Rico.
Leffanta Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Mahalo, Nancy! Aloha!
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 12:53 PM
well, we did not even get the mule! (hmm, actually it's close to the donkey, so in a way we got it)
Leffanta Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 10:04 AM
Many people believe we got the ass, but Poetry Soup banned that! Aloha!
Anaya Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 7:13 AM
Nov 15· A baby born in the Philippines has been declared the world's eight billionth person as United Nations confirmed that the population passed the landmark figure yesterday. We are the fools.
Leffanta Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 10:51 AM
Imagine what a difference Elon Musk could have made byinvesting in 8-billion people rather than investing billions in twitter! Aloha!
Mccann Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 3:25 AM
Gosh, I'd totally forgotten that "40 acres!" Thank you for the reminder. Governments? Yeah, Promise her anything, but... Elizabeth
Leffanta Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 10:52 AM
And that was what Congress was like before Trump! Thank you for your comment on my short story! Aloha!
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 2:53 PM
After I combobulated on this poem for a little while, I became discombobulated. Oh, some did not get their forty acres and a mule. Creative work. Definitely has some humor. Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate the time spent there reading and taking time to comment. Sara
Leffanta Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 10:53 AM
and some will get student loan relief? Aloha!
Eslinger Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 12:36 PM
Rico, I’ve heard that promise when listening to classic radio shows,..actually an interesting metaphor. aloha, salli
Leffanta Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 10:53 AM
"You ain't heard nothing yet!" Aloha!
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