Carrie Richards Poet Acrostic

Elastic---Acrostic

Elastic stretches bit by bit, around your thick dimension

Lets  you wiggle,  if you're pudgy, from too much fudge retention

A second portion...now, you're ecstatic....Alas, you've licked the kettle!

Should I tattle or meddle much,  or call for intervention?

Thus, your middle may need attention, is it a time for fudge redemption?
 
I hope you won't judge my good intentions, or hold a grudge.... OOPS!

Caught by chance, I wear stretch pants!! Your fudge tastes quite fantastic!! 





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9/24/13  For Andrea's "Seven" Contest

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Debbie Guzzi October 9, 2013 at 7:40 AM Refreshing a bit of silly on a sunny morning! THANKS Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Skat A October 8, 2013 at 8:10 PM very cool Carrie.......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 8, 2013 at 3:06 PM Carrie, congrats on your winning placement in the acrostic challenge contest! LOVE yours so much (I'm still wearing my maternity pants, sorry to say)Nicely done...Love and blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A October 8, 2013 at 11:16 AM a wonderful win Carrie,, congratulations on your Acrostics challenge...love Linda

Robert Johnson October 6, 2013 at 5:10 PM You've licked it down to the last taste. It don't seem right, it all goes to your waste. But if we are a double dipper, we better be sure to have a strong zipper. Enjoyed and congrats. :)

David Fisher October 6, 2013 at 2:29 PM It's not a stretch to say that this is a funny poem...and deserving a good placement in the contest!

Sandra Adams October 5, 2013 at 6:40 PM this is too cute...congrats on your win :)

Oluwatomiwo Akinyemi October 5, 2013 at 3:57 PM Luvly poem...always nice to pull of an acrostic...thnks 4 visiting my page..

Kelly Deschler October 5, 2013 at 1:44 PM A very funny and "sweet" poem, Carrie! This made me smile! :) Terrific work! Congratulations on your win, as well!...Thank you very much for the great comments. They are truly appreciated!

Andrea Dietrich October 5, 2013 at 12:06 AM Yours took the CAKE for FUNNY. LOVED it, Carrie. BIG congrats on your number three win.

Kash Poet September 28, 2013 at 1:09 PM Hahaha...enjoyed.

Poet Tacito September 25, 2013 at 7:55 AM HAHAH! Fudge & a glass of chocolate milk for me, please!!!! I am IN LOVE! =D Awesome laughs in this!

Seren Roberts September 24, 2013 at 9:53 PM Carrie I love it, just my sense of humour....Seren