Get Your Premium Membership

Elastic Ice

I feel a searing chill in my bones as they painfully turn to black ice Under the weight of my loneliness I fear there's an ultimate price Will I witness my own demise As cracks appear under this weight The thought of an endless sadness as I am doomed to a horrible fate I look out to the red horizon On the beach a pail made of plastic I pray to find a similar strength a soul that is much more elastic With each and every laboured step too numerous for me to number Slowly the walk becomes easier Perhaps I am turning to rubber Feelings they bounce in my mind and yes they do make me shake although there's vibration in my soul this elastic heart will never break! Dedicated to Armand. The poem was inspired by a comment I left on his poem "Of Three States of Mind an intricate weave". Do read his poem it is masterfully written.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/14/2017 10:41:00 AM
Powerful spiritual truths this poem bespeaks, Richard. An unbreakable spirit is true grit. Incisive, sharp double-edged poetry. Let your glittering pen sword slay the darkness always. Love and peace forever.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/6/2017 11:06:00 AM
This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/11/2017 5:43:00 PM
Don't ever break...
Login to Reply
Date: 2/9/2017 4:31:00 PM
Excellent word choice and control throughout.
Login to Reply
Date: 2/7/2017 9:24:00 AM
WoW Richard. What a wonderful piece this is. So much feeling and emotion. Can't say enough good things about it. Must read Armand's poem. Thanks for the heads up. God Bless and a 7 from me. JB
Login to Reply
Date: 2/6/2017 11:43:00 AM
A powerful write, Richard! I must go back and read Armand's poem. I do love his writing g and yours...L&B, Rhonda
Login to Reply
Date: 2/6/2017 10:17:00 AM
Basic instinct drives us to survival. Perseverance drives us to success! Deep write, Richard and I have read his poem:)
Login to Reply
Date: 2/6/2017 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Richard. This is a brilliant write. Very impressive. A Fav of course!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/5/2017 3:38:00 PM
Another good poem of yours filled with sublime messages dear, Richard!
Login to Reply
Date: 2/5/2017 3:11:00 PM
Great poem Richard x Rubber never fades x lasts forever x
Login to Reply
Date: 2/5/2017 12:57:00 PM
Yes, Richard, I can see the relationship that exists between his poem and yours. However hard life treats us, we must never give up. Regards // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 2/5/2017 11:38:00 AM
I love this Richard...loneliness is a heavy burden for anyone to carry...a terrific tribute to Armand and his beautiful poem...a fav
Login to Reply
Date: 2/5/2017 11:35:00 AM
Wow! I love the positive ending. Life sure can be tough for so many. Great poem. Having a strong heart and will certainly helps us persevere. Very nice dedication to Armand's poem.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs