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Elaelana

Elaelana- A Nymph In the Forest
Inspired by Charles Amable Lenoir's painting, "A Nymph In the Forest"

Pronunciation: 
Elaelana; Eh-lee-LAY-nuh, 
Naphesai; Nah-feh-SIGH, 
Mylesia; My-lee-SEE-uh

Elaelana, forest goddess, kneels beside the water lilies
Picking dainty, gem-like flowers to adorn her crown of hair;
Borrowed gems from Naphesai, her lovely sister of the daisies,
Flow'rs that thrive in shady woodlands, by the streamlet floating there.
 
Dressed for nymphean starlit dances in a dress of flowing creamrose;
Flawless slender arms upraised to rearrange the sable strands
Trailing from her Grecian features, pearly white against the gleamrose
Of silent lips, a little pressed, like rosebuds' tightknit ruby bands.

Ready now, so tall and stately, shadowlike drifts thro' the forest,
Joined at length by Mylesia, and her sister, Naphesai:
Elaelana, Mylesia, Naphesai, the sweetest, fairest
Threesome ever seen or heard that sang the nymphish lullabies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Castellenas Avatar
July 14, 2018 at 4:42 AM
A wonderful poem. A epic journey.
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:57 PM
Isaiah, CONGRATULATIONS, on your awesome 12 liner Ekphrasis WIN! :) SKAT
Kendrick Avatar
February 11, 2015 at 3:06 PM
Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara
A. Sharma Avatar
February 10, 2015 at 3:51 AM
Exquisite write my dear poet friend Isaiah!Congrats on big win!
Onclaud Avatar
February 9, 2015 at 12:29 AM
congrats on your big win.. this is so mystical and well done!
Relish Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 9:39 PM
What a beautiful picture...a fairy land theme... congrats on your deserving win
Guzzi Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 4:42 PM
Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Marcum Wong Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 12:14 PM
You have captured the essence of her beauty so effortlessly in this poem that painting and poem are ONE! Outstanding writing Isaiah. I am fav'ing this beauty. 7+
Gorelick Avatar
February 8, 2015 at 10:45 AM
You bring your lovely paintings to us and it is much appreciated..this is lovely..congrats. Barbara
Haight Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 7:21 PM
Such a beautiful poem, Isaiah. Congratulations on your win. Sandra
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 3:15 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Isaiah:-) simply sublime I so love this and the beautiful image and imagery:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 8:37 PM
this is so metrical and effortlessly rhymed. I think this contest has not been judged yet if it is for the one I am thinking of, and it deserves a top placement. I wish I could find a poem of yours I have not commented to yet. but I have been clicking away and still have not discovered it. Let me try a little bit more!!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 4:02 PM
I think you did this challenge so well!! and thanks for what you said to me. I would rate you in the top ten of poets here who know how to use meter with rhyme to its best advantage!!
A. Sharma Avatar
January 7, 2015 at 11:12 AM
Outstanding work Isaiah! To understand had to read twice!
Allison Avatar
January 6, 2015 at 5:00 PM
Divine image - simply outstanding poem and just in awe Isaiah! Good luck in the contest - a 7 from me wish it could be a 10! :-) hugs Jan xx
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