Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

Either Do Or Die

when the sun hangs low into the sky 
and evening sends her shivers 
softly down your spine 
it is time to recollect your thoughts 
does he love me does he not 
lost between the daisy and the rose 
you feel like you have lost your pose;
Waiting for the morning dawn 
waiting for his casting crown of glory 
Arms long to touch, hearts longs to love 
when the sun hangs low in the crimson sky,  
its either do or die.

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Paula Goldsmith May 31, 2022 at 2:32 PM WOW!!! A beautiful write. Today, be blessed...............

Alexis Y. May 17, 2022 at 1:11 PM Hi Mystic, I enjoyed how you wrote this one. Being in the situation isn't a Good feeling. However, life must go on. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day-Alexis

Michelle Faulkner May 16, 2022 at 3:44 PM So lovely of the space between the day and dark, the morning promise and evening reckoning, very deft~

Victor Buhagiar May 14, 2022 at 10:47 PM Nothing worse than indecision. Mystic Rose Rose May 15, 2022 at 3:20 AM no I don't like it when my heart quivers and wonders, steady is best

Sara Kendrick May 14, 2022 at 4:16 PM Yes, sometimes it seems that to be held in the arms of our loving Savior would be the most precious time and it will happen. Right now, we have to depend on the hug of a friend, loved one, and knowing that our Savior loves us through those relationships. I enjoyed reading this one today. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara Mystic Rose Rose May 14, 2022 at 6:37 PM There are times when it seems only His love can save us Sara, thankyou for your kind visit , God bless