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Either Do Or Die

when the sun hangs low into the sky and evening sends her shivers softly down your spine it is time to recollect your thoughts does he love me does he not lost between the daisy and the rose you feel like you have lost your pose; Waiting for the morning dawn waiting for his casting crown of glory Arms long to touch, hearts longs to love when the sun hangs low in the crimson sky, its either do or die.

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Date: 5/31/2022 2:32:00 PM
WOW!!! A beautiful write. Today, be blessed...............
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Date: 5/17/2022 1:11:00 PM
Hi Mystic, I enjoyed how you wrote this one. Being in the situation isn't a Good feeling. However, life must go on. I enjoyed the read. Have a great day-Alexis
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Date: 5/16/2022 3:44:00 PM
So lovely of the space between the day and dark, the morning promise and evening reckoning, very deft~
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Date: 5/14/2022 10:47:00 PM
Nothing worse than indecision.
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Date: 5/15/2022 3:20:00 AM
no I don't like it when my heart quivers and wonders, steady is best
Date: 5/14/2022 4:16:00 PM
Yes, sometimes it seems that to be held in the arms of our loving Savior would be the most precious time and it will happen. Right now, we have to depend on the hug of a friend, loved one, and knowing that our Savior loves us through those relationships. I enjoyed reading this one today. I appreciate the visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 5/14/2022 6:37:00 PM
There are times when it seems only His love can save us Sara, thankyou for your kind visit , God bless

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