Deborah Burch Poet Limerick

Eighties Shadies

Eighties Shadies

There once were two fine Southern Ladies
Both sisters and late in their eighties 
By day who were prim
Come night hit the gin
And skinny-dipped down in the shadies. 

©deborah burch~11.19.17

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Kim Rodrigues February 6, 2020 at 7:29 AM Funny!

Andrea Dietrich December 1, 2017 at 9:26 PM EXCELLENT limerick!

Paul Callus November 22, 2017 at 4:46 PM Read this with a big smile, Deborah:) Gin and being slightly naughty must be their secret for longevity! ~ Hugs // paul Deborah Burch November 22, 2017 at 8:01 PM Lol!! I agree Paul!! Life is too short not enjoy and live it!!

Frank Sheehan November 22, 2017 at 1:10 PM Great limerick Deborah. Very imaginative and funny. Enjoyed it immensely. Deborah Burch November 22, 2017 at 8:02 PM Thanks so much Frank!! :) glad you got a giggle!!

John Gondolf November 21, 2017 at 1:38 PM Wow, two ladies in their eighties drinking gin and skinny-dipping, I'm gonna have a hard time getting that image out of my head...hahaha Nice one, Deb. Deborah Burch November 21, 2017 at 1:59 PM Lol!! Yeah... but oh the hope it offers to life!! Lol. At least it's in the dark!! ;)

Joanna Daniel November 21, 2017 at 6:27 AM Ha Ha, Cap'n, great fun:) glad to see you back:) Deborah Burch November 21, 2017 at 12:34 PM Lol ;) thanks Jo!! Good to see you too!! Big hugs!!! Cap'n

Jan Allison November 19, 2017 at 3:45 PM ha ha ha great humour Deborah:-) hugs jan xx Deborah Burch November 19, 2017 at 3:50 PM Lol!! ;) thought you might you might like that Jan!! Thanks hun!! Biggest Hugggs!! Love ya deb!!