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Eighties Shadies

Eighties Shadies There once were two fine Southern Ladies Both sisters and late in their eighties By day who were prim Come night hit the gin And skinny-dipped down in the shadies. ©deborah burch~11.19.17 (Limerick)

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/6/2020 7:29:00 AM

Funny!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/1/2017 9:26:00 PM

EXCELLENT limerick!

Paul Callus

Date: 11/22/2017 4:46:00 PM

Read this with a big smile, Deborah:) Gin and being slightly naughty must be their secret for longevity! ~ Hugs // paul

Deborah Burch
Date: 11/22/2017 8:01:00 PM

Lol!! I agree Paul!! Life is too short not enjoy and live it!!

Frank Sheehan

Date: 11/22/2017 1:10:00 PM

Great limerick Deborah. Very imaginative and funny. Enjoyed it immensely.

Deborah Burch
Date: 11/22/2017 8:02:00 PM

Thanks so much Frank!! :) glad you got a giggle!!

John Gondolf

Date: 11/21/2017 1:38:00 PM

Wow, two ladies in their eighties drinking gin and skinny-dipping, I'm gonna have a hard time getting that image out of my head...hahaha Nice one, Deb.

Deborah Burch
Date: 11/21/2017 1:59:00 PM

Lol!! Yeah... but oh the hope it offers to life!! Lol. At least it's in the dark!! ;)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/21/2017 6:27:00 AM

Ha Ha, Cap'n, great fun:) glad to see you back:)

Deborah Burch
Date: 11/21/2017 12:34:00 PM

Lol ;) thanks Jo!! Good to see you too!! Big hugs!!! Cap'n

Jan Allison

Date: 11/19/2017 3:45:00 PM

ha ha ha great humour Deborah:-) hugs jan xx

Deborah Burch
Date: 11/19/2017 3:50:00 PM

Lol!! ;) thought you might you might like that Jan!! Thanks hun!! Biggest Hugggs!! Love ya deb!!