Eight Minutes and Nineteen Seconds At Light Speed

Sun; 
sizzling sentinel of the skies, 
scorcher of worlds, 
sits in splendour; 
shooting sublime shadows across the 
speckled sheet of time.

08/03/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2015 at 8:37 PM
very succinct, and I LIKE THAT WAY!!
Lindsay Avatar
August 20, 2015 at 2:55 AM
why use a thousand words when a more diminuitive number will suffice? Blessyer ;)
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August 18, 2015 at 12:04 AM
Bill, l just came by to say congratulations on your awesome win:-)Alexis
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August 17, 2015 at 11:11 PM
I love it, Bill. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
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