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Eight Mile Ryme Bubble Bath Battle

Eight Mile Rhyme Bubble Bath Battle You want to love me don’t you Why won’t you My words will soak into you just like I told you Do you feel my flow? I’m soft rhyming iridescent sultry slow I’ll drown you with the sensual letters I know Feel that bubbling inside of you grow I love that red glow you try not to let your pleasure show even though I can feel you vibrate from head to toe I’ll listen to what you say But responding is child play Your words are duller than bath water grey Me, I shape shift like kneaded clay slip slide inside of you every way Baby try to rapid repeat like me let that passionate prose spray Bubble bounce onto me Slinky Ricky Rhyme Time’s here to stay I’m domesticated wild in the groove dialed No one’s more intricately freestyled pushing up against surfaces travertine tiled Screams overtaking the radio dial I’ll be far down below near 8 mile This white rapper is never tongue tied Sit back and enjoy it for a while As my textured tongue dexterity is applied That smell you’re smelling That isn’t burnt toast That’s you having a stroke It’s not terminal you’re not going to croak I’m the elixir for things that used to be broke But them lame words you’ve got All of them dissipate like smoke They tickle a bit in my throat but not enough to cause me to choke I’m relaxing in this word bath climatically enjoying my soak rightly writing every pen stroke Woman get yourself into my tub I’m not just playing “Rub a Dub Dub” What I’ve got is too big to tug My vocabulary is a drain swirling tornado much more potent than any drug Out from under you I won’t pull the rug Although my ego is supersized I ‘m not smug when the word play is over I’ll comfort you with a towel and a hug!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 8/30/2019 5:17:00 AM
Hahaha! Oh wow I remember this did! Lol! See had me almost starting to rap! Haha! Wow Rick this takes me back to day when I hangin with Nick and oooo lol let me stop because I was ready to bust out with a flow! Lol! This has me smiling all the way through Rick I really enjoyed this!;)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/30/2019 9:20:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, this was a fun one to write
Date: 7/4/2019 11:53:00 AM
These slinky rhymes vibrate from head to toe, and that is why my lips are saying wow) Nicely done, Richard. The word play never ends. J'aime. Congrats, by the way.
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Date: 7/5/2018 2:41:00 PM
I see this was a winner. Congratulations, Richard.
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Date: 7/4/2018 8:55:00 AM
Hi Richard, back for one of your fun writes. I always enjoyed reading them. Looks like big belated congratulations are for this wonderful piece. It sings on with a quick-fire beat. Love the rap, love the humour. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 6/24/2018 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 6/24/2018 6:13:00 AM
That is quite the invitation, Richard. You'll have lineups out your bathroom door. LOL Congrats on your win with this fun poem.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/24/2018 7:48:00 AM
Thanks Line!
Date: 6/23/2018 7:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Richard! Janice
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/24/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thanks Janice.
Date: 6/23/2018 7:01:00 AM
Swinging back, Richard, with big congratulations on your win! This gets a fave from me! Love it! Hugs. Pandita
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/23/2018 8:06:00 AM
Hi Pandita, it was a fun one to write. I’m pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 6/16/2018 6:35:00 PM
Oh my goodness this made me frickin' smile. i love it. you got some mad skillz my friend x
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/16/2018 8:17:00 PM
Ha ha, thanks!
Date: 6/8/2018 7:40:00 PM
Another masterpiece from the Master of Verse - a delightful read! Thx for dropping by the Campfire (Tales) - you are always welcome - Bob
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/16/2018 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Robert.
Date: 6/6/2018 6:37:00 AM
Omg I cant stop laughing at Harry's comment, because I was thinking exactly the same about my boring baths. Richard, this up tempo quick beat poem of yours has Winner stamped all over it. Thoroughly enjoyed from beginning to end....Maria hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/6/2018 8:43:00 AM
Your response has brought me a big smile. Thanks for your visits this morning Maria.
Date: 6/6/2018 5:03:00 AM
wow my bath times are not like this, no wonder mine are so boring,,,,brilliant to read and to shout out loud too,
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/6/2018 8:45:00 AM
Ha ha, all you have to do is add bubbles and the right partner.
Date: 6/3/2018 6:59:00 PM
Hello Richard, Wow! This is a super poem. i have read it several times. I have enjoyed this poem. I smiled while reading your poem. have a nice day my friend.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/6/2018 8:47:00 AM
You as well Darlene, thanks for reading it several times.:0)
Date: 6/2/2018 10:15:00 AM
OMG, Richard - I am super impressed - this is such a remarkable rap! A couple years ago, I used to drive my younger son to cypher rap sessions where they did freestyle battles and it was amazing to witness so much talent. You got it, my friend! This is definitely a top winner! Peace out. Pandita
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/6/2018 8:48:00 AM
So sorry I missed this great comment. I’m pleased you enjoyed my playful words.
Date: 5/30/2018 6:53:00 PM
An adept pen, a great flair for word craft! Clever twists! Amazingly delightful. I enjoyed reading your poem. Thank you for sharing, stay blessed.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2018 7:17:00 PM
Thanks Besma, just me enjoying a bit of silliness. Blessings to you as well.
Date: 5/29/2018 8:57:00 PM
Hah!!!! Loved this, you had me a bit worried at "Rub a Dub Dub" was hoping there wouldn't be 3 men in that tub! I find this very sweet like a love poem as well!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2018 5:28:00 PM
Thanks Arthur, only one woman in my tub.;0)
Date: 5/29/2018 3:07:00 PM
Who says we can't rap..lol Well done with this humorous write...Best of luck in the contest Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2018 4:06:00 PM
Thanks Charles, I had fun splashing around with this form.
Date: 5/29/2018 10:58:00 AM
Goodness!!! Big sigh... not at all what I expected. Lol. Clever, intriguing word play... rub a dub dub HOT! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2018 12:44:00 PM
;0) thanks Susan.
Date: 5/29/2018 8:23:00 AM
Ummmmmm... Ok. That's quite the word play. I'd delve into that tub without delay... hey hey hey!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2018 8:26:00 AM
I thought I would take this Rap battle in a slightly different direction.:0)
Date: 5/29/2018 6:53:00 AM
Loved it :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Yazmin.
Date: 5/28/2018 3:28:00 PM
Fab rap and i love your humour - just going to relax in my bubble bath and see if i get inspired to write but think this contest is beyond me:-) good luck and give your lovely 'mama bear' a HUGE hug from me:-) hugs jan xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2018 8:23:00 AM
Thanks, coming from the queen of Comedy that is a great compliment. Thanks for the visit Jan.
Date: 5/28/2018 3:22:00 PM
Great rapping Richard, and a little humor... I know I am not even going to attempt this..Thank you so very much for your encouraging compliment on my poem “From Now On”. Hugs Eve
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2018 8:24:00 AM
My pleasure Eve.
Date: 5/28/2018 2:43:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this delightful poem, Richard. Sure to top the winners list. Elaine
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2018 7:54:00 AM
Ha ha, I hope so. Thanks for the visit.
Date: 5/28/2018 2:32:00 PM
haha, white wrapper and what you have to tug. Those were just a few that made me chuckle. So well done, Richard. This is one I probably won't even be attempting.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2018 7:49:00 AM
I’m sure you would do a great job.
Date: 5/28/2018 12:53:00 PM
You've done a brilliant job of this Richard. You mightn't look like a rapper but boy you can write it. Good luck. Tom
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/28/2018 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Tom, it was a fun one to write.
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