Eight Elements of Winter

last Autumn colours -
lost in winter snow.

twin vapour trails
on sky November blue,
Canada geese in formation-
head south.

November sombre,December dark,
January,February cold and stark
Rain filled days of slush and muck,
webs on shards of gossamer shade
'til snowdrops matamorphise in the glade.

On the lawn strewn leavings 
of a ravenous raptor-
nature's journal leafs another chapter.

makeshift banks
overhang into drifts-
snow falls icy blue

winter arrives late-
in the forest a stoat melts into 
a snowdrift

out of the silence
of the winter night,
a single owl screech
darkness descends-
hunger abates

the tiles dusted with snow-
trickle down rivulets fill the
rain butt
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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La France Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 8:48 AM
Brian, this poem is magical from frozen Canada, your friend - Constance
Strand Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 10:42 AM
Cheers Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
September 9, 2017 at 9:13 PM
More lovely images! :)
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September 10, 2017 at 12:09 AM
Its where my poetic voice lives.Thanks Kim
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