Eight Days a Week

maudlin

maudlin Monday's mostly mud
halts the weekend with woeful thud
laughs and sillies
get the willies
on maudlin Monday, what a dud

tintinnabulous

tintinnabulous Tuesday
is the second paying-dues day
we head uphill
but it’s no thrill
'cause we’re not there, but we’re on our way

wadd'lin

wadd'lin Wednesday straddles the hump
wiggles and shakes like a wide-angle rump
it’s a little too slow
with way too much show
wadd’lin Wednesday makes us “harumph”

thoracic

thoracic Thursday we’d like to send west
we want to get Thursday off of our chest
we’re not so sure
we can endure
thoracic Thursday'd be a good day to rest

finally

finally Friday, when it gets here
makes one take a look in the mirror
to practice a smile
to reclaim a style
time to get ready for giggles and beer!

sleep in

sleep-in Saturday comes with the blues
has way too many of those chore-ing to-do’s
so get outta bed
with hung-over head
and put off whatever you choose

shuff'lin

shuff'lin Sunday saunters along
changing tempo, just like a song
pretty soon then
it’s time again
for Monday and that is just wrong!

elusive 

elusive, the eighth day hides from the rest 
we like to think we’d like it the best
but we’d probably waste it
and then we’d lambast it.
an eight day week the Beatles addressed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/29/2016 6:48:00 AM
LOL!! People don't envy Sunday, why? because it reminds them of Monday. Lol. I love this.
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Date: 1/1/2017 8:38:00 AM
Thanks for visiting Abosede! and a Hoppy New Year to you!
Date: 12/20/2016 9:35:00 AM
Ha, ha, great way to describe the days of the week John! Deserves GOTD! :)
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Date: 12/20/2016 10:32:00 AM
Wow! GOTD! I'm thrabblegasted! ;-)
Date: 12/20/2016 6:44:00 AM
- They are fun all together .... but, I choose FRIDAY :))) - Well done :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/20/2016 10:30:00 AM
YAY FOR FRYDAY!!! huggadoos ~ j
Date: 12/19/2016 4:52:00 PM
well, i hope that someone gives YOU the giggle of the day, john. if not, let me have the honor! i love this poem!!!
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Date: 12/20/2016 10:29:00 AM
I yam doubledy honored! GOTD! and a visit from my favorite NY correspondent. Thanks!
Date: 12/19/2016 11:24:00 AM
Bahahaha!!! I love this j!!! Profound and funny. My kinda stuff! :) big hugs!! Deb
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Date: 12/20/2016 10:29:00 AM
huggedoodledoos backatcha!
Date: 12/19/2016 10:53:00 AM
Lol...Wangtanglin week of downers and ups.
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Date: 12/20/2016 10:28:00 AM
what you said!
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