Eh, Pal What Are Your Chances of Winning

Eh, pal what are your chances of winning?
Ah, you could have banked all this saving
for an early retirement...
to cherish that sentiment!
When you're completely broke, start cringing!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Taylor Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:19 PM
Congrats, Andy. Great limerick. Nice going. Ralph
Merryman Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 3:23 PM
Congrats on your win, Andrew! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan Burch's "Lottery Ticket Limerick" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 7:52 AM
Andrew congrats on your win..David
Bunton Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 7:10 AM
congratulations
Dietrich Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 4:22 PM
YOu hit the nail on the head for what it can do to people! Congrats on the win, Andrew
Sweetheart Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 12:48 PM
congrats Andrew on another fine win for lottery Limerick.. great title..thankxx for blog comment too..
Dietrich Avatar
January 3, 2012 at 11:06 PM
YEs, one would cringe indeed, gambling it all away like that (my brother in law has this problem!) good luck in the contest, my friend.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace